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Band 4+: Write a letter to the college administration. In your letter: ask about the course details ask about the fees ask about accommodation options

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Dear sir,

I am writing to enquire about a course fees and accomadation at your college. I am interested in one of the joining course your college and obtain with information about course fees and available accomodation.

Firstly, i would be like to you whether know about fees including the examination and registration and i also would like to know that fees can be paid instalments and if there are any discounts and scholarships for international students.

Secondaly, i would apperciate if you could provide with information about accomodation. Could you tell me please about available accamodatoin and how much there cost per month? I wuold also like to know that the other meals and internet acsess including in your available accomodation.

I would be grateful if you send me information earlist this convenience.I look forward your hearing as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

X.Y.Z.

Word Count: 145

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

would: 4

course: 3

information: 3

available: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the three main points (course, fees, and accommodation) and is generally on topic. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the course is not specified, and the request for accommodation details is somewhat vague. The letter would benefit from clearer organization and more precise language. To improve, specify the course of interest, ask for specific details about the course (e.g., duration, entry requirements), and structure the letter with clear paragraphs for each topic. Also, ensure all questions are directly relevant and avoid repetitive phrasing. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical structure with an introduction, two main paragraphs, and a closing, but the flow is disrupted by numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Secondaly'), and the final paragraph is unclear. To improve, focus on using clear topic sentences and linking words, and ensure each paragraph has a single clear purpose. Also, revise the closing to be more direct and polite.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'accomodation', 'apperciate', 'acsess', 'earlist'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some word choices are inappropriate (e.g., 'joining course' instead of 'courses offered'). To improve, expand your vocabulary related to academic and accommodation contexts, and practice spelling common words. Use more precise terms like 'tuition fees', 'installments', 'scholarships', 'on-campus housing', and 'utilities'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, missing prepositions, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'I would be like to you whether know about fees' is unclear, and 'I would be grateful if you send me information earlist this convenience' is grammatically incorrect. There are also issues with punctuation and capitalization (e.g., 'Dear sir' should be 'Dear Sir', and 'i' should be 'I'). To improve, review basic grammar rules, practice writing clear and simple sentences, and proofread your work carefully. Focus on using correct verb tenses and prepositions.

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