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Band 6+: a friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. in your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be a suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job.

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Dear Rain,

I hope this letter will find you great. I received your message recently. I feel glade you are going to move to my country in the next month, and I am happy to tell you that I have found a suitable work for you, which you will be comfortable with.

To begin with, the work post is pharmaceutical representative for a prestigious company located in my city. The job contains tasks like educate doctors about the new products which the medical laboratories have made. In addition, you have to record these visits on computer as an Excel document.

As you are a pharmacist and have been practicing on computer programs, I think it will be the most suitable work for you.

You can submit your resume on the company’s official website, or I recommend sending it to me, then I hande it in to the company directly.

I am looking forwards for hearing your response.

Best regards,

Rahaf Hatoum

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing information about the job, its suitability, and the application process. However, the letter could be more detailed in explaining the job responsibilities and the application process.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors that affect the flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains a few grammatical errors, particularly in the use of articles and verb tenses. These errors affect the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter.

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