Process Diagram

Band 4+: Academic Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Life Cycle of Glass and Plastic, with Recycling The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: Academic Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Life Cycle of Glass and Plastic, with Recycling The diagram below gives information about the recycling of glass and plastic containers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays the "LIFE CYCLE OF GLASS AND PLASTIC, WITH RECYCLING." The process begins with a "new product," which undergoes "collection" over 3-8 weeks, followed by "transport to recycling centre" taking 5-10 days. At the centre, materials are split: "sorting glass by color" and "sorting plastic by thickness and quality." The glass path continues with "crushing," "washing," and "melting and reshaping," which is noted as "(done by the same machine)," leading back to a new product. The plastic path involves "bundling," "shredding," "washing," "melting," and "reshaping," with a note that melting and reshaping "(must be done by separate machines)," before becoming a new product.

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The digram below gives informition about the record of plastic containers and glass.

Overall, the life cycle of plastic and glass with recyling are record every tow month, from new product then collection and transport to recyling center after that it reurn to the orginal.

Firstly, new prodecut will be cullection in 3-8 week then it’s goes to recyling center by transport, however there tow way to record the first way is sorting glass by color after it arrived to the hob of recyling then it crusthing and washing then melting that must be done by speparate, so after that it’s got reshping then it’s finish.

Secondly, after collection arrived to the hob it would be a sorting plastic by thickness and quality then bundling and shredding, for a long time after that washing it and melting and reshaping it would be done by the same maching after that it should be a new product again.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

after: 6

recyling: 4

record: 3

plastic: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the life cycle of glass and plastic recycling but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the steps in the diagram, using precise language, and organizing the information into a clear and logical structure. Pay attention to grammar and spelling to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles with coherence and cohesion. The organization of information is unclear, and the flow of ideas is difficult to follow. The description of the processes for glass and plastic recycling is muddled, and the connections between steps are not always clear. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate or group related ideas. Use of cohesive devices is limited, leading to a disjointed presentation. Improve the logical flow by clearly separating the descriptions of glass and plastic recycling processes into distinct paragraphs. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and steps within each process.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice ('record' instead of 'recycling,' 'hob' instead of 'hub,' 'crusthing' instead of 'crushing,' 'speparate' instead of 'separate,' 'maching' instead of 'machine,' 'cullection' instead of 'collection,' 'prodecut' instead of 'product'). There is a lack of precision in describing the processes. Expand your vocabulary related to manufacturing and recycling processes. Use a dictionary or thesaurus to find more precise and varied words. Pay attention to spelling and ensure accurate word usage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in article usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Punctuation is also used incorrectly in several places. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules, including verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually increase complexity as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully for errors in grammar and punctuation.

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