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Band 5+: An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Sammy,

Sorry for the late reply. I was busy doing my homework. I’m so glad that you are coming here for holidays. Let me tell give you some information and advise to you about my region.

There will be a lot of rental places to stay. If you want you can stay at my mom’s house for free obviously. That house is located near beach where you can enjoy watching the sea, sunset and sunrise. Or you can stay at the guest house apartment for rent but it will be very costly.

You must bring you camera! You’ll see a lot of beautiful things in here. You should at least bring two swimming suits, 2 pairs of shoes, 3 nightgowns, evening dresses and normal day clothes. You should try snorkeling and you should go to see the manta rays in here. I am sure you will love it.

I have to dash now my mom needs my help. Reply me as soon as possible. Bye.

With love

Jasmine

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 3

should: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by offering information about where the friend can stay and what activities to do in the region. However, more details could have been provided about the area and specific recommendations for activities. Additionally, the advice on what clothes to bring is somewhat limited.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. The flow could be improved by separating the information about accommodation, activities, and clothing more clearly into distinct paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some words are repetitive, and there are a few inaccuracies. More varied and precise vocabulary could enhance the overall quality of the letter. Additionally, some phrases could be more idiomatic and natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are errors in punctuation, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading for these issues would improve the grammatical accuracy.

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