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Band 5+: As a parent, you write an email to other parents and invite their children to take part in your child's birthday party. Your email should include the following three themes: - when and where will the party be held - what food will be served - what activities will be arranged.

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Dear parents,

I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing this email to invite your children to celebrate my child’s birthday. I arrange party on next week Friday evening. Moreover, this party will be organized in a small swift restaurant which is situated near to our home.

We will arrange various variety of food like, first we arrange appetizers and after that dinner will be take place but before the dinner we will cut cake and then distribute among the guests.

Besides this, we have arranged some curricular activities for children as well like all children are around 10 so we will play bottle spin task, in this activity we will move bottle towards children and children need to do something when the bottle’s face on their side. After that we have arranged swings for children. I would be really grateful if you join us on this excited occasion with your children.

Yours sincerely,

Divya,

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6.5

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The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

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4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks sophistication and precision in places. Some word choices are repetitive or slightly inaccurate.

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3.5

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