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Band 4+: Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a map of Brandfield with two proposed sites labeled S1 and S2 for a shopping mall; key symbols represent Golf Course and Park (yellow), City Centre (red), Housing Estate (brown), Industrial Estate (pink), River (solid blue line), and Railway (dashed blue lines); S1 located near City Centre, S2 near Housing Estate; Golf Course and Park situated in a central location between two Housing Estates; an Industrial Estate on the extreme right; a River snakes through the city, and Railway lines surround and partially bisect the city.

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As it shows in the picture above, it shown that a map of Brandfield with two places proposed a new shopping mall that will be added into the district. The two sites that will be add with a mall has their own advantages and disadvantages.

The spot number 1 which shown as s1 in the picture above is very near from the housing estate which it will be good for the people that live there. It will be much easier to acces the mall. Eventhough its near the housting estare area it can affect to disturb them in their free time. Aslo the mall places is ve tu near the housting area which is hard to acces because it will be block to block with the housting area.

While the spot 2 is bot located near the house estate. The seconr mall is located near the industrial estate which is very good the industry and can affect many things to them. And the second mall is very easy to acces there is 2 road to acces it.

Even with all the advantages and disadvantages both of the mall can be good for the distric

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

which: 4

acces: 4

estate: 3

housting: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by mentioning the two proposed sites and some of their surrounding features. However, the description is quite general and lacks specific details from the map. The writing contains inaccuracies and is poorly organized, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between the sites. To improve, focus on providing more precise details from the map, organizing the information clearly, and using more accurate language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main points. Consider organizing your report into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the map (e.g., location of S1, location of S2, comparison of accessibility). Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'spot,' 'add,' 'acces'). Expand your vocabulary by using synonyms and more specific terms to describe the locations and features on the map. For example, instead of 'near,' you could use 'adjacent to,' 'in close proximity to,' or 'within walking distance of.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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