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Band 7+: birth rate among different aged group birth per 1000 women in England from 1973 to 2020.

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The image illustrates birth rates per 1,000 women in England from 1973 to 2020 for four age groups: in 1973, aged under 20 at ~50, aged 20-25 at ~120, aged 28-34 at ~70, aged 40+ at ~5; in 1980, aged under 20 at ~40, aged 20-25 at ~95, aged 28-34 at ~65, aged 40+ at ~9; in 1993, aged under 20 at ~35, aged 20-25 at ~75, aged 28-34 at ~80, aged 40+ at ~15; in 2001, aged under 20 at ~30, aged 20-25 at ~65, aged 28-34 at ~90, aged 40+ at ~20; in 2008, aged under 20 at ~35, aged 20-25 at ~65, aged 28-34 at ~105, aged 40+ at ~25; in 2020, aged under 20 at ~10, aged 20-25 at ~40, aged 28-34 at ~100, aged 40+ at ~35.

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The given line graph illustrates women’s birth rate in England, between 1973 and 2020.

Overall, a tremendous decline was showed in a group among 20-25 aged females, whereas the rating in 28-34 aged women experienced the most dramatic rise in comparison with other groups.

Initially, the 20-25 aged women ranked first place, accounting for around 120 ( birthe per 1000); however, at the end of the survey, it dropped significantly to almost 20. Compared to females aged 20-25, the women under 20 represented a negligible oscillation for approximately 5 in 2001, after which it constituted roughly 20 in 2020.

With regard to the remaining categories, at the beginning, the rate for 28-34-year-old females recorded an enormous surge from about 20 to just over 50 in 1980, which continued its upward trajectory, comprising about 80 by the end of the given period. While, the females aged 40 and above experienced a slight decline from just under 20 for almost 10,making up nearly 5 in 2020.

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women: 3

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by summarizing the main trends in birth rates across age groups, but there are notable inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the birth rate for women aged 20-25 is stated to drop to almost 20 by 2020, whereas the visual shows it at around 40. Similarly, the rate for women aged 28-34 is said to start at about 20 and rise to 80, but the visual indicates it starts at around 70 and ends at about 100. The rate for women aged 40+ is described as declining, but the visual shows an increase. These inaccuracies affect the clarity and accuracy of the summary. Additionally, some comparisons are made, but the overview could be more precise. To improve, ensure that the data reported aligns with the visual information and that key trends are accurately described. Proofreading for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing would also enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall trend and logical grouping of information. However, there are some issues with cohesion: the use of 'While' as a sentence connector is incorrect, and the progression between sentences could be smoother. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more skilfully managed. To improve, ensure that linking words are used accurately and that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is varied and mostly appropriate, with some good attempts at less common words (e.g., 'tremendous decline', 'negligible oscillation', 'upward trajectory'). However, there are occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'showed' instead of 'shown', 'birthe' misspelling, 'comprising' instead of 'comprising of' or 'reaching'). To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid minor errors that can distract the reader.

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The report demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences. However, there are some grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb forms ('was showed' should be 'was shown'), missing articles, and punctuation issues (e.g., comma after 'While'). These errors are minor but noticeable. To improve, proofread carefully to eliminate such mistakes and ensure that punctuation is used correctly throughout.

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