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Band 5+: Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image includes two charts detailing films screened in the UK and Australia in 2001, and cinema admissions from 1976 to 2006. Chart A shows: Others (2% Australia, 5% UK), Australian Films (11% Australia, 1% UK), UK Films (5% Australia, 20% UK), US Films (85% Australia, 74% UK). Chart B shows: UK admissions start at approximately 120 million in 1975, with fluctuations peaking around 170 million in 2002, then falling to about 160 million in 2006. Australian admissions start at nearly 30 million in 1975, rise steadily to peak around 90 million in 2001, then decline to just above 80 million in 2006.

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Chart A and B compares the cinema markets in both UK and Australia. Chart A shows films screened in the UK and Australia in 2001, while Chart B demonstrate the cinema admission by both UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.

Overall, US films has reached the highest amount in screening in both Australia and UK, in contrast to Australian films scoring the lowest. In chart B, a significant difference shown between Australia and UK, whereas the cinema admission of UK in 1975 to 2005 is higher then Australia.

Initially in 2001, around 75% of films shown in UK and around 65% in Australia, were Americans films. UK represent the quarter of screened films in UK, compared to Australia with only 5%, leaving up to 20% between both countries in other countries.

Cinema admissions rose steadily facing an upward trend. UK reached around 100 million in 1975 then marking its peek around 170 million in 2000, finalizing with a steady pace for 150 million in 2005. On the other hand Australians grew significantly from 30 millions in the early 1970’s up to 80 millions in 2005.

Overall, although US dominated the markets, both countries has grew up steadily highlighting elevated trends.

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview of the data in both charts. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies. For example, the report states that US films accounted for around 65% of films screened in Australia, when the visual description states 85%. To improve, ensure that all key features of the charts are accurately described and compared. Also, pay attention to the accuracy of the data cited from the charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs sometimes lack clear transitions and connections between ideas. For instance, the shift from discussing film percentages in 2001 to cinema admissions over time feels somewhat disjointed. To enhance coherence, consider using transition words and phrases to link sentences and paragraphs more explicitly. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data and develops that aspect fully before moving on to the next.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise or sophisticated word choices could enhance the description. For example, instead of saying 'has reached the highest amount,' you could use 'dominated' or 'accounted for the largest share.' Similarly, 'scoring the lowest' could be replaced with 'representing the smallest proportion.' To improve lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and more specific terms related to market share and cinema attendance. Also, pay attention to collocations and ensure that words are used in their correct context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and readability. Common issues include incorrect verb tenses ('US films has reached'), subject-verb agreement problems, and awkward phrasing ('leaving up to 20% between both countries'). There are also issues with article usage and prepositional phrases. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and pay attention to common grammatical errors. Focus on using a variety of sentence structures to showcase grammatical range, but ensure that each sentence is grammatically correct and conveys your intended meaning clearly.

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Band 5+: Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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