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Band 4+: Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

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The image depicts the development of the village of Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994, with established areas indicated for the periods 1868-1883, 1883-1922, 1922-1970, and 1970-1994. The area includes a main road, motorway built in 1970, and a railway built in 1909. The Chorleywood station and Chorleywood Park and Golf course are labeled. The patterns indicate growth surrounding the transportation lines and main roads over time.

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the given map depicts the development of th chorleywood village which was led by its increasing population from 1968 to 1994.

overall, it is noticeable that a lot of area has came under development except a negligible one. Conversely, main roads, railways and motorways were layed out in different years.this was followed by development of different areas in consequetive years.

The development begin from year 1983 where it covered marginal area on the south-west side of the village with establishment of the railway and chorleywood station on the south sid . Moreover, two main roads were built crossing each other in the north-west. In the time period between 1922 ans 1970, a considerable area was constructed in the south of the village across the junction of main road and railways. Subsequently, motorway was built with a round about in north-east side of the village.

A very large area was under developed between1970 to 1994, it covered most of the east side of the layout.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and describes the chronological changes, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. There are several chronological errors (e.g., stating development began in 1983 instead of 1868, and misinterpreting the time periods) which make the description confusing. To improve, ensure that the dates mentioned in the report strictly align with the visual data provided. Additionally, focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to ensure the progression of development is described logically and clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear organizational structure. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'overall', 'moreover', 'subsequently'), they are often used incorrectly or do not help the flow of information. The progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed, and the paragraphing does not effectively separate the introduction, overview, and specific details. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences are logical and smooth.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and contains several spelling and word-formation errors (e.g., 'th', 'layed', 'consequetive', 'ans'). There is also some repetitive use of basic terms. To reach a higher band, aim to use a wider range of academic vocabulary and ensure that word forms (such as past participles) are used correctly. For example, instead of 'a lot of area has came', use 'a significant portion of the area underwent development'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede the reader's ability to follow the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'The development begin from year 1983'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, with several instances of missing spaces after periods and lowercase letters starting sentences. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensuring that all verb tenses are used accurately when describing historical developments.

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