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Band 5+: Commuting by bus cars and trains over 60 years in uk

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The image shows a graph with data on UK commuters using cars, buses, and trains from 1970 to 2030. Car commuter numbers start at 5 million in 1970 and increase steadily, reaching just over 7 million in 2000, before rising sharply to 9 million in 2030. Train commuters begin at 2 million in 1970, rising gradually to just over 3 million in 2000, and continue increasing to approximately 5 million by 2030. Bus commuters start at about 4 million in 1970, decrease slightly to around 3.8 million in 1980, maintain levels around 3.5 million from 1990 to 2010, and then decline further to approximately 3 million by 2030.

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The given graph demonstrated the average value of UK commuters travelling everyday by car, bus or train by 1970 to 2030. Number of commuters is shown with millions and timeframe had decade periods.

Overall is it clear that throughout given period, majority of people prefered accommodation by car. Initially, Bus commuters number was higher than train users. However, Bus preference saw a downfall trend by the end of the period while Train commuters number climbed and reached 2nd choose.

The graph further collocates that after the year 1990, trends started to change and car commutter numbers are rose dramatically and reached approximately 7 million. In the same timeframe Bus commutter number had slight decline. Train usage had fluctations throughout period and showed steady behaviour between 2000 to 2010.

By the year 2030, graph predicted that car commuters number will witness upward trajectory also train usage will preserve its climb and bus users will reach an all time low with 3 milllion.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in commuting by car, bus, and train over the given period. It includes an overview and key features, such as the dominance of car commuting and the contrasting trends for bus and train. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: for example, the report states that train commuters reached '2nd choose' but does not specify the actual numbers, and it mentions fluctuations in train usage without detail. The data for car commuters after 1990 is not fully accurate (it says 'approximately 7 million' but the graph shows a rise to 9 million by 2030). Additionally, the report does not mention specific figures for bus commuters in the early years or the plateau from 1990 to 2010. The language is generally clear but has some grammatical errors (e.g., 'Overall is it clear', 'car commutter numbers are rose'). To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and language is polished.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, coherence is sometimes hindered by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'Overall is it clear', '2nd choose'). The progression of ideas is generally logical, but the use of cohesive devices is limited and occasionally inaccurate. To improve, focus on sentence clarity and use a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some attempts at less common words (e.g., 'downfall trend', 'upward trajectory'). However, there are frequent errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'prefered accommodation by car', 'collocates', 'commutter'). These errors sometimes obscure meaning. To achieve a higher score, expand your range of vocabulary and ensure accurate use of words and phrases, particularly collocations and subject-specific terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the report, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'car commutter numbers are rose', 'Train usage had fluctations'). These errors significantly affect readability and coherence. While some complex structures are attempted, they are often inaccurate. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence construction, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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