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Band 5+: Comparing Fruit Sales at a Farmers' Market and a Supermarket. The fruits are: pears, pinapples, oranges and strawberries.

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The image shows a bar graph titled 'Top Selling Fruits' comparing the 'Number of Fruit Boxes' sold at a Farmers' Market versus a Supermarket. For strawberries, sales were Farmers' Market: 7, Supermarket: 3. For oranges, sales were Farmers' Market: 6, Supermarket: 4. For pears, sales were Farmers' Market: 5, Supermarket: 8. For cherries, sales were Farmers' Market: 2, Supermarket: 2. For pineapples, sales were Farmers' Market: 2, Supermarket: 2.

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The provided bar graph illustrates the difference of saled fruit boxes in supermarket and farmers’ market on five various products.

Overall, there are high difference at strawberries, oranges, and pears. In contrast, cherries and pineapples sales are same in both places.

There is high demand to the strawberry in farmers’ market, sold seven boxes, however this number is three in supermarket. The most sold fruit is pear in market, at eight boxes, compared with farmery only five boxes pear are sold to costumers. Costumers buy the orange more in farmers’ place, 6 boxes. However, in market 4 boxes are consumed in market which is less than farmers’ market, with 2 boxes. The most obtained fruit is pear in supermarket with 8 boxes.

On the other hand, cherry and pineapple are consumed same in both market places at two boxes from both fruits. In addition, the least demand is on cherry and pineapple.

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boxes: 8

market: 7

farmers': 4

fruit: 3

supermarket: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and covers the main features of the graph, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, and the data for strawberries, oranges, and pears is presented, though the comparison for oranges is unclear and contains a minor error. The report also includes cherries, which are not listed in the task, but this is acceptable as they appear in the visual description. However, the report omits the comparison for pineapples and cherries in terms of their equal sales, which is a key feature. Additionally, there are some grammatical and lexical issues (e.g., 'saled', 'farmery', 'costumers') that affect clarity. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately compared and use clearer language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is somewhat vague and does not highlight the most significant trends effectively. The body paragraphs present data in a somewhat random order, and the final paragraph introduces a new point without clear connection. To improve, use clear topic sentences, logical ordering of data (e.g., from highest to lowest), and cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but limited in range and precision. There are several word choice errors (e.g., 'saled' instead of 'sold', 'farmery' instead of 'farmers' market', 'costumers' instead of 'customers') and repetitive phrasing. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms (e.g., 'purchased', 'recorded', 'accounted for') and ensure correct word forms. Also, avoid informal or incorrect terms like 'high difference' - use 'significant difference' or 'notable variation'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede clarity. There are subject-verb agreement problems, incorrect prepositions, and sentence fragments. For example, 'the difference of saled fruit boxes' should be 'the difference in the number of fruit boxes sold', and 'there is high demand to the strawberry' should be 'there is high demand for strawberries'. To improve, review basic grammar rules, use a variety of sentence structures, and proofread carefully to ensure accuracy.

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