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The image shows a bar graph depicting the average percentage of daily calories from fast food consumed by men and women in different age groups in 2015. For age 18-34, men consumed 17%, women 15%. For age 35-49, men consumed 13%, women 11%. For age 50-64, men consumed approximately 10%, women just below 10%. For age 65+, men consumed 7%, women approximately 6%.

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The bar chart illustrates junk fjjd intake among female and male in 2015.

Overall, it is evidence that the proportion of young men cinsamption fast food showed the highest fogure than womenm.However, the rate of old age group men showed the lower figure.In addition,the rate of old age women showed the lower result.

According to the bar chart, we can see that the percentage of 18-34,35-48 age group male and famele showed the higher result. The proportion of 134 age group men accaunted for 18%, while women made up 16%.In contrast, the rate of 35-49 age group male and female made up only 10% and 8% respectively.

when it cimes to remaining categories, the index of 50-61 and 65+ age group men and women showed the lower figure.By contrast, the proportion of 50-64 age male, who intake fast food constitute mere 9%, moreover female accaunted for 8%. Similary, the percentage of 65+ men made up only 5%, and women consist of 3%.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main trends in fast food consumption across age groups and genders. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 18% vs. 17%, 16% vs. 15%, 10% vs. 13%, 8% vs. 11%, 9% vs. 10%, 8% vs. just below 10%, 5% vs. 7%, 3% vs. 6%) and some age groups are misstated (e.g., '35-48' instead of '35-49', '50-61' instead of '50-64'). The report also includes irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g., 'junk fjjd', 'cinsamption', 'fogure', 'womenm', 'accaunted', 'cimes', 'index', 'constitute mere') that detract from clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, using precise age ranges, and ensuring the language is clear and formal. Additionally, avoid introducing irrelevant information and ensure the overall structure is coherent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by age groups, but the flow is disrupted by frequent errors and unclear referencing. The overall message is difficult to follow due to inconsistent phrasing and lack of clear paragraphing. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (e.g., overview, younger age groups, older age groups). Use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'whereas' more accurately to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several inaccuracies and misspellings (e.g., 'fjjd' for 'food', 'cinsamption' for 'consumption', 'fogure' for 'figure', 'accaunted' for 'accounted'). There is some attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'proportion', 'rate', 'index'), but they are not always used correctly. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'percentage', 'share', 'figure', 'approximately', 'notably') and ensure correct spelling and word choice. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly impede understanding. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'the rate of old age group men showed'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'is evidence' instead of 'is evident'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often incomplete or awkward. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct grammar. Review basic tenses, subject-verb agreement, and use of articles. Practice writing more complex structures only after mastering accuracy.

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