Bar Chart

Band 5+: The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows a bar graph depicting the average percentage of daily calories from fast food consumed by men and women in different age groups in 2015. For age 18-34, men consumed 17%, women 15%. For age 35-49, men consumed 13%, women 11%. For age 50-64, men consumed approximately 10%, women just below 10%. For age 65+, men consumed 7%, women approximately 6%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart compares junk food consumption in 2015 between two genders according to specific age criterias.

Overall,despite any age,men illustarted slightly higher results than women.However,as ages grew,the consumption of fast food declined,regardless of two genders.

Teenagers and adolascents showed the greatest result in the chart with approximetly 17 percent of consumption.But,when it came to men with age of 35-49,it dropped dramatically to 10 percent which soon also declined slightly to 9 percent, in 50-64 year old men.The final drop occured among men over 65,indicating 5 percent of consumption.

The similar figues were seen in women consumption.Starting with 16-34 year old showing 16 percent,which falls adequately by 9 percent showing the same results with 50-64 year old men.Although,it decreased little to 8 percent among 50-64 year old.Finally,the smallest proportion of fast food utilization was seen in women over 65,showing 3 percent.

Word Count: 141

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percent: 7

50-64: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report covers the main trends and key data points from the graph. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '17 percent of consumption' for teenagers and adolescents, 'dropped dramatically to 10 percent' for men aged 35-49, '9 percent' for 50-64 year old men, '5 percent of consumption' for men over 65, '16 percent' for 16-34 year old women, '9 percent' showing the same results with 50-64 year old men, '8 percent' among 50-64 year old, '3 percent' for women over 65). Also, the organization could be improved by grouping the data more effectively. To improve, ensure data accuracy and consider a more structured approach to presenting the information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and inaccuracies. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to improve the connection between sentences and paragraphs. For example, using 'similarly' or 'in contrast' can help to guide the reader through the comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat basic and repetitive. There's an attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'junk food' for 'fast food'), but the range is limited. To improve, try to incorporate a wider variety of vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data analysis. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'consumption,' consider alternatives like 'intake,' 'proportion,' or 'percentage of calories derived.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('illustarted' instead of 'illustrated'), subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward, affecting clarity. Focus on improving basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submission. For example, 'Teenagers and adolascents showed the greatest result' should be revised to 'Teenagers and adolescents showed the highest consumption rate.'

Answers On The Same Topic:

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

This bar chart illustrates dietary intake of fast food among men and women from different age groups in the year 2015. Overall, younger generation consumed highest proportion of daily calories from fast food and senior citizens consumed the lowest amount of fast food. In all the four age groups dietary intake of men was unhealthier […]

Band 6+

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The bar chart depicts the average daily intake of fast food among males and females for the year 2015. Overall, the consumption was higher in men as compared to women throughout age groups, and in terms of a particular age bracket, the 18-34 year group ranked highest in eating junk food, while people above 65 […]

Band 6+

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The given bar chart compaires the percentage of fast food consumption in men and women in different age gaps in 2015. overall, The men has stayed at the top in every age group from age 18 to 55 in consumption of huge calories. on the other hand, the women have consume some what less unhealthy […]

Band 4+

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The consumtion of fast food among different aged groups of man and women in 2015 is illustated in the given bar chart. The daily calories is measured in peopertion. To srutinize, young people have consumed the highest calories from street foods, while older people experienced the least prefer to eat out side food. Reamining aged […]

Band 5+

See All

the percentage contribution of the IT and service industries to the GDP

The given data displayed features of the UK’s GDP between 1992 and 2000. Overall, IT industry percentage of GDP throughout entire graph always take the highest position in all possible that’s bar chart time periods.Meanwhile, both of service industry and IT industry increased. To begin, IT industry started fluctuated in 1992 from just over 6 […]

Band 6+

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of garbage collected by a recycling facility over a five-year period from 2011 to 2015. Overall, all four categories showed an upward trend, albeit to varying degrees. Notably, the amount of paper waste experienced the most significant increase throughout the period, whereas the figures for glass, tins and garden […]

Band 8+

The type of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.

The graph illustrates the percentage of the type of media that people of different age groups used to get dily news in one country in 2011. There is 5 age groups and 3 types of ways of getting news. Overall, it is clear that as the age became older then the percent of all three […]

Band 5+

The graph shows changes in meat production worldwide between 2010 and 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates differences in meat production worldwide between 2010 and 2020. Overall, in this chart the most popular meat type is pork and beef, while sheep meat is least popular. Beef increased and dominated constantly 8 years, while poultry increased significantly only in 2020. In 2010, Beef had the highest production, maintaining 25 million […]

Band 5+

See All

Band 5+: The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

The fast food consumption among men and women in 2015.

Other Topics:

the percentage contribution of the IT and service industries to the GDP

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

The type of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows changes in meat production worldwide between 2010 and 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the destinations of students graduating from Physics and from Arts Design in one European country in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium