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Band 6+: Dear parent, We are planning to improve our school canteen soon.What food and drinks should be added to the menu?What changes should be made during the renovation?When would be the best time to do this work? Best wishes, School Principal write a short email to another parent.Say what food and drinks you want in the menu,what to change during the renovation,and when should it be done?write about 50 words

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Hi Parent,

I have received an email from our children’s school, and they are asking for my opinion about improving the canteen and adding new meals to the menu. I suggest adding natural juice, yogurt, and vitamin-rich salads to the menu. During the renovation, it would be great to repaint the walls and improve hygiene in certain areas.

Ideally, the best time to do this work is during the summer holiday.

What about you?

Take care,

Iroda

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by suggesting food and drink items, renovation changes, and a suitable time for the work. The response is relevant and sufficiently detailed for the word count. To improve, ensure all suggestions are as specific as possible within the word limit. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is effective, and the transition between ideas is smooth.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a strong command of vocabulary, using appropriate and varied language to express ideas clearly and effectively.

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The letter exhibits excellent grammatical control, with accurate and appropriate use of punctuation and a variety of sentence structures.

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