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The image showcases two diagrams comparing library layouts from 1975 and the present. In 1975, the layout included an entrance flanked by two staircases with "Books and magazines" on the left, "New books" and "New books" on the right, two "Bookshelves" to the left, "Library desk" centrally positioned between them on the right, "Booths/desks" on the lower left, "Toilet" centrally at the bottom, and "Children's book" on the lower right. In the present diagram, changes show an entrance with added "Wheelchair access" on the right, the left section transformed to "Computers" above, and a "Coffee" area below; "New books" remain on the right, while "Library desk," "Shared areas," "Children's book," "Toilet," and "Bookshelves" maintain their previous positions.

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The diagram illustrates how a library has been changed from 1975 to the present.

Overall, the library experienced several developments throughout the period. Some facilities remained unchanged, namely the library desk, the children’s book shelf, and the toilet. In contrast, other facilities were replaced, while the shared areas were redeveloped.

In the present, the books and magazine station was replaced by the computer in the top left corner, while in the opposite corner, the new books station was reduced in size by adding wheelchair access right next to it. This change can be seen in the bookshelves stations, one remained the same in the bottom-left corner, while another one was replaced by the coffee station.

Apart from the children’s book and the library area that have been in the same place since 1975, there was the development in the shared areas, moving it to the right side next to the children’s section and also became larger by now.

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The report adequately addresses the task by describing the changes to the library layout. The overview is acceptable, and the body paragraphs present a reasonable summary of the key differences. However, there's room for improvement in terms of organization and detail. To improve, consider structuring the body paragraphs more thematically, perhaps grouping changes by area of the library. Also, be more specific with details, quantifying changes where possible (e.g., mentioning the addition of wheelchair access or the specific relocation of the shared areas).

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the transitions between some sentences and ideas could be smoother. For example, in the third paragraph, the connection between the changes in the top left corner and the addition of wheelchair access could be more explicit. Consider using cohesive devices like 'similarly,' 'furthermore,' or 'in addition' to enhance the flow. The paragraphing is adequate, but ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of changes or features to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, and there is an attempt to use varied language. However, there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the description. For example, instead of 'experienced several developments,' you could use 'underwent significant renovations' or 'was substantially redesigned.' Also, consider using synonyms for words like 'facilities' and 'areas' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. Overall, the lexical resource is adequate but could be improved with more sophisticated and precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, 'the books and magazine station was replaced by the computer' could be improved to 'the books and magazines section was replaced by a computer area.' Also, 'This change can be seen in the bookshelves stations' is awkward; consider rephrasing it to 'A similar change occurred with the bookshelves.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct preposition usage to improve grammatical accuracy.

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