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Band 4+: Discharge below shows the average daily our spent on laisure and sports activities by the youngest and oldest age groups in the US in 2015.

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The image displays a bar chart detailing average daily hours for various leisure and sports activities in the US for ages 15-19 and 75 and over in 2015. Watching TV: 15-19 at 2.4 hrs, 75 and over at 4.5 hrs. Reading: 15-19 at 0.3 hrs, 75 and over at 1.0 hr. Relaxing and thinking: 15-19 at 0.2 hrs, 75 and over at 0.4 hrs. Socializing and communicating: 15-19 at 0.7 hrs, 75 and over at 0.4 hrs. Playing games/computer use: 15-19 at 0.6 hrs, 75 and over at 0.1 hrs. Sports, exercise, and recreation: 15-19 at 0.7 hrs, 75 and over at 0.3 hrs.

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The first thing that comes up to my mind paying attention at the diagraph is how low is the time people in US in 2015 dedicated to sports, exercise and recreation compared to the time spent watching TV.

Nevertheless attention is needed also at the time spent in socialising and reading , very low compared to the others.

I also think it can be considered quite obvious that younger generations are spending less time watching tv than the older one even because the letter are living their retirement life and of course have more free time.

I really don’t understand why the youngest spent less than one hour socialising, at that age that should be one of the most important things for their right growth.

In conclusione I would say that these factors reflect what is happening in the societies all around the world due to the progress of technologies: less sport, skyrocketing of number of obesity and less social activities.

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The response attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant and inappropriate personal opinions and speculations. The report does not focus on describing the data presented in the graph. To improve, concentrate on objectively describing the key trends and differences shown in the chart, avoiding personal opinions or external observations about societal impacts.

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The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas jump from one observation to another without a logical flow. The writing would benefit from a clearer structure, perhaps grouping observations by age group or activity type. The 'In conclusione' feels abrupt and doesn't effectively summarize the data presented. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and create a smoother reading experience.

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The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive ('time spent,' 'low'). There are also instances of imprecise word choice ('diagraph' instead of 'diagram,' 'letter' instead of 'latter'). Expanding your vocabulary and focusing on more accurate word choices would improve the report. Try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'The first thing that comes up to my mind paying attention at the diagraph' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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