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Band 5+: In your letter, You should: Tell them where did you go and what you are doing there (job) Describe your feelings Invite your friend to come

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Dear Valen:

I hope this email finds you well my friend! I finally have some time to write you, I’ve been so busy about the adaptation to this new country but here I am.

As you may know It’s been a month since we got to Australia and I have to say things are going pretty well here! We are staying in Melbourne wich is a beautiful city, full of culture and people from all around the world. Also, recently me and my boyfriend got new jobs as a Baristas wich is very cool because the coffee here is very important and I’m learning so much stuff about the coffee that I didn’t learn back in Argentina so I have to say, I’m having the best time here! The people is very warm here so I don’t feel uncomfortable at all.

I am very happy here, and I hope you come visit us sometime, maybe next month when we get our apartment done and everything because besides that it is the best city I really miss my bestie!

Write back whenever you have time, that is a summarise of my life recently and I’d like to know about your stuff too. Again I miss you, and say hi to everyone around there!

Loves, Loli.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing details about the writer's location, job, feelings, and invitation. However, there is room for improvement in terms of clarity and organization.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the overall cohesion.

Lexical Resource

6

The writer uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some minor errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors in grammar and punctuation that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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