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Band 6+: Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Previous week, I celebrated my birthday with my mates at your restaurant, the one at Oxford Street. Me and my friends had a wonderful time dining at your restaurant.

To start with, the food was scrumptious and freshly cooked, the server really did suggest some great dishes. The waitress who served us did an exceptionally good job, they were moving back and forth for us just to make our visit memorable.

We also enjoyed the restaurant’s environment, the dim lights and the decorations was pleasing. Every guest were treated with respect and honour, which was quite fascinating.

However, I would like to make a suggestion to improve the things. It would be awesome if you could open more branches in different areas, also increase the space of the car park, we had to park across the street as there was no space infront of the restaurant.

Overall, it was a great experience and would love to visit the restaurant again. Thank you for your service.

Regards,

Pulse Sorathiya.

Word Count: 172

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task effectively. You clearly mentioned the food and service, described the atmosphere, and provided relevant suggestions for improvement. The tone is appropriate for a formal letter of appreciation. To reach a higher score, ensure better grammatical precision; for example, subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'decorations were' instead of 'decorations was' and 'every guest was' instead of 'every guest were') and more natural phrasing (e.g., 'Last week' instead of 'Previous week'). Additionally, while the suggestion to open more branches is valid, focusing more on the specific location's amenities (like the parking issue mentioned) would make the suggestion feel more directly tied to the experience described.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter follows a logical structure, addressing all parts of the prompt in separate paragraphs. However, the transitions between ideas could be smoother. Some sentences are slightly repetitive (e.g., mentioning 'your restaurant' multiple times in the first paragraph). To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices and avoid starting sentences with 'Me and my friends' or 'To start with' in a way that feels overly simplistic. Ensure that each paragraph flows naturally into the next.

Lexical Resource

You have used some good descriptive vocabulary, such as 'scrumptious', 'exceptionally', and 'memorable'. However, some word choices are slightly informal or imprecise for a letter to a business (e.g., 'mates' is quite casual; 'environment' is better replaced with 'ambience' or 'atmosphere' in a restaurant context). Additionally, 'fascinating' is not quite the right word to describe being treated with respect. Aim for more sophisticated and context-appropriate synonyms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the overall polish of the letter. Specifically, there are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'decorations was' should be 'decorations were'; 'Every guest were' should be 'Every guest was') and pronoun usage ('Me and my friends' should be 'My friends and I'). There are also some run-on sentences where commas are used instead of full stops or conjunctions. Focus on mastering subject-verb agreement and varying your sentence structures to include more complex sentences correctly.

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