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Band 4+: Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir Arjuna

The Director of Garuda Airlane

I am writing this letter to inform you that I forgot my black bag when I left the garuda plane with number flight JKSS02 destination to London. My number seat is E3 and the date of my flight is 21st Mei 2024, landing time about 19.00 Wita.

Honestly, I totally overlook about the bag until I arrived at Aston Hotel. My bag contains a document of my work, pens, charger, pink pouch, make up stuff and some of post card.

However, I really sorry for my flaws but I knew garuda aiplane is a professional corporation which is so care and responsible to their loyal customer.

On the other hand, I begged to crew of garuda airplane to looking for my bag and please call me at 081543189795 if you find my bag. I will pick up soon in the airport after i got your called.

Your Faithfully,

Wildha Ardianti

Word Count: 158

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

garuda: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining what happened, describing the bag and its contents, and stating what the writer would like the airline to do. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and missing details that could be improved upon. Try to provide more specific information such as the size or brand of the bag and a clearer request for the airline to take action.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally coherent and easy to follow. The writer uses paragraphs effectively, but there are some issues with cohesion and linking ideas. Work on improving the flow between sentences and ideas to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used in the letter, but some words are misspelled ('Airlane' should be 'Airline', 'garuda' should be capitalized as 'Garuda', 'Mei' should be 'May'). Additionally, some phrases could be more formal and precise. Aim to use more sophisticated and accurate vocabulary to improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings present. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and sentence clarity. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation will help enhance the grammatical range and accuracy.

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