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Band 4+: Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear madam

Henry’s here. I am student of socialism at Coventry university which located in this town so I find a part time job for manage my expenses

I can help you in every type of home work like cooking food cleaning home maintenance of any home equipment garden cleaning etc

Basically I am form india I am new in this town or country by participating in your home work its give ma a good experience and also learning about your tradition and culture I am also a experienced person because I spending some hours with my mom for home work at my home town

Also I already informed you I am student so I will not available on Tuesday because my university held a weekly presentation on Tuesday instead I wll available six days in a weak

Waiting for your good response

Your well wisher

X y z

Word Count: 149

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by mentioning the willingness to help Mrs. Barrett with various household tasks and explaining availability. However, it lacks specific details on how the student plans to help during the summer and why they are interested in this work. Providing more detailed and relevant information would improve the task response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks a clear structure. There are some issues with cohesion, such as abrupt transitions between ideas and a lack of logical progression. Consider organizing the content into paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using words more accurately. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and sentence structure to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation. Review grammar rules and practice sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy. Additionally, pay attention to sentence construction for better clarity.

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