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Band 6+: Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Last week, I saw the advertisement in the our town’s newspaper about you are seeking someone to help you. I am writing this email to provide my assistance and to inform details of my skills.

First of all, I am skilled at various household tasks, such as laundry and cooking, due to I have a lot of diverse experiences in part-time jobs. Particularly, I am talented at cooking and dishwashing, because currently I am working in a restaurant. When I heard that you were experiencing inconvenience due to the broken dishwasher, I felt deeply sorry and wanted to offer my assistance.

Unfortunately, I am unable to assist you all day. I can only available in the daytime on weekdays. This is because, in the afternoons, I have to go to downtown to work.

If you want to ask any further information, feel free to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Minwoo Chun.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all aspects of the task, but could be more detailed in its explanation of availability.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There are a number of grammatical errors throughout the letter, which affect the overall clarity and accuracy.

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