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Band 7+: Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing regarding my application for the job position that you have advertised. I am passionate about nursing work, either to take care of adults or children. As you are seeking someone to take care of your child, I believe that I can help you with watching her out and also teaching her painting, which I think she might be interested in.

I moved to this city to study at university. However, I need a part time job to be able to afford accommodation. Therefore, this is a perfect oppotunity for me. In addition, as I am studying painting, It would be fascinating for me to teach drawing to your child.

My current course will finish in two months, and I will be available from the 1st day of June. I look forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Yeganeh

Word Count: 149

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7
The letter addresses all parts of the task, suggesting help, explaining the reasons for wanting the job, and indicating availability. However, the response could be improved by providing more specific details about the types of help offered and a more detailed explanation of availability. For example, mentioning specific days or times of availability would strengthen the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few areas where the flow could be improved. For example, in the second paragraph, the connection between needing a part-time job and teaching drawing could be made more explicit. Consider using transition words or phrases to link your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate. To enhance the letter, try incorporating a wider range of vocabulary related to childcare and your skills. For instance, instead of just 'watching her out,' you could use phrases like 'engaging her in creative activities' or 'ensuring her safety and well-being.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. For example, 'oppotunity' should be 'opportunity'. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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