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Band 5+: Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention about the article which you published a day before yesterday and it was related to “Lake Of Balasinor”.

I born and brought up in that village with my grandparents even during festive time I visit my native to meet them for that I am aware about the history of Sudarshan Lake which is also described in the book of history.

In your article you mentioned that the lake was built by Jhon Kim in 1925 but it was incorrect. In 1925 it was built by the citizens of balasinor for the purpose of irrigation during summer season and provide plenty of water to farm.

I request you to correct the article and also add footnote states that information was incorrect.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The information is clearly presented, although some aspects could be more thoroughly explained. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some lexical choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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