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Band 5+: Task 1: The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows visitor data: 1997 - 300,100 adults, 120,000 under 15, 28,000 exhibition; 2002 - 302,200 adults, 110,000 under 15, 29,200 exhibition; 2007 - 400,500 adults, 87,000 under 15, 37,700 exhibition; 2012 - 380,000 adults, 82,300 under 15, 42,000 exhibition; totals: 1997 - 448,100, 2002 - 441,200, 2007 - 525,200, 2012 - 504,300.

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THE BAR CHART COMPARES THE NUMBER OF MULTIPLE TYPES OF VISITORS TO A MUSEUM FROM 1997 TO 2012 .

TO SUMMARIZE , ADULTS WERE HIGHEST IN NUMBER EACH YEAR . IN CONTRAST , SPECIAL EXIBITION VISITORS WAS AT A LOW IN EVERY PARTICULAR YEAR ALTHOUH IT HAD BEEN GROWN WITH TIME .

FIRSTLY , IN 1997 , THE MAJORITY OF VISITORS WERE ADULT MOREOVER THE NUMBER WAS ABOUT 0.3 MILLION . AFTER THAT , IT REACHED IT’S PEAK POINT IN 2007 BY CROSSING 0.4 MILLION . FURTHERMORE , THE NUMBER FRUCTUATED IN A SMALL MARGIN IN 2012 NEVERTHELESS IT WAS STILL THE HIGHEST COMPARE TO OTHERS .

SECONDLY, THE NUMBER OF VISITORS WHO IS UNDER 15 WAS AVERAGE . IT WAS 120000 IN 1997 AND FALL DOWN DAY BY DAY . IN 2012, IT REACHED IT’S OWN LOWEST POINT BY NUMBER HITTING 82300 . LASTLY , SPECIAL EXIBITION VISITOR CARRIED LESS NUMBER COUNT COMPARE TO 2 OTHERS THROUGHOUT THE YEARS BUT THE NUMBER HAD BEEN INCREASED DAY BY DAY FROM 280000 TO 480000.

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