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Band 5+: Task 1: The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows visitor data: 1997 - 300,100 adults, 120,000 under 15, 28,000 exhibition; 2002 - 302,200 adults, 110,000 under 15, 29,200 exhibition; 2007 - 400,500 adults, 87,000 under 15, 37,700 exhibition; 2012 - 380,000 adults, 82,300 under 15, 42,000 exhibition; totals: 1997 - 448,100, 2002 - 441,200, 2007 - 525,200, 2012 - 504,300.

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The line graph illustrates how many guests went to museum starting from 1997 and 2012. Overall, in the percentage of adult guests experienced an upward trend, while the percentage of teenagers and special exhibition guests had an opposite result there were a small result during all given years. Notably, the percentage of adult guests were more in 2007 and had 400,500 percentage compared with others.

Body 1. In 1997 the percentage of adult guests was for 300,100, however, there was a slightly growth a little bit for 302,200 till 2002. Nevertheless, there was a significant growth during 5 years, from 302,200 to 400,500. Despite the rise, there was a rapidly decline in 2012. Analyzing the teenagers, there weren’t interested in visiting of museum. The most highest result was in 1997 for 120,000. Year by year it was decreasing. Thereby between 2002 and 2007 there was a big changes in the percentage of visitors, from 110,000 to 87,000. And finally, there was decline for 82,300.

Body 2. The most small percentage was in special exhibition visitors. But despite of this, year by year, there were more people. In 1997 consisted about 28,000 and in 2002 there was a slightly rise for 29,200. Additionally there was a rapid growth till 37,700. And after some years there was a goal from 37,700 to 42,000

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 11

percentage: 7

guests: 5

adult: 3

result: 3

years: 3

growth: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents some of the main features of the data. However, there are inaccuracies and a lack of clarity in the description of trends and values. The organization is acceptable, but the language contains errors that affect the overall clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and ensuring grammatical correctness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization into paragraphs is present, but the flow of ideas within and between paragraphs needs improvement. The introduction provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' 'furthermore') would help to link ideas and improve the overall coherence. The structure could be strengthened by grouping information more logically, perhaps by visitor type or by period.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive ('percentage,' 'growth,' 'decline'). There is an attempt to use descriptive language ('slightly growth,' 'significant growth,' 'rapidly decline'), but the phrasing is not always accurate or natural. Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise language would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'percentage of adult guests were more,' consider 'adult guest numbers peaked.' Also, avoid using 'percentage' when the graph shows actual numbers. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('guests went' should be 'guests visited'), subject-verb agreement issues ('guests was' should be 'guests were'), and awkward phrasing ('there were a small result'). Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures would significantly improve the clarity and effectiveness of the report. Pay close attention to articles, prepositions, and correct tense usage.

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