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Band 6+: Task 1: The charts below show the number of tourists to Australia from three countries in 1995 and 2005, and the types of travels between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts numerical data on tourists traveling to Australia in specific years and types of travel undertaken during those years; for "Number of tourists to Australia," data is segmented by country and year, showing in 1995, UK: 580,000; US: 620,000; Japan: 810,000, and in 2005, UK: 1,230,000; US: 1,370,000; Japan: 1,400,000; for "Types of travel," figures are represented by activity and year, displaying Staying at resorts: 1995: 1,000,000; 2000: 2,500,000; 2005: 1,600,000 and Backpacking: 1995: 300,000; 2000: 900,000; 2005: 1,200,000.

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The bar chart illustrates how many people from three countries traveled to Australia between 1995 and 2005, whereas the line graph gives information about the number of individuals traveling by staying at resorts and backpacking.

Overall, the figure for tourists from the UK and the US registered a significant increase, while the reverse was true for Japanese visiting Australia. Moreover, whereas staying at resorts increased dramatically, backpacking witnessed a drop.

Regarding Australia’s travellers, the number of individuals from the UK started with 800,000 in 1995, after which it surged to 1,500,000 in 2005. While the figure for tourists from the US accounted for 500,000 people in 1995 and then tripled in 2005, Japanese began at 1,500,000 which made up the most visitors in Australia in 1995 but decreased to two-thirds of the previous number.

In terms of types of travels, backpacking was more prevalent than staying at resorts. Backpacking was 1,600,000 in 1995, followed by a soaring to approximately 2,500,000 in 2000, declining sharply to 1,100,000 at the end of the period. Meanwhile, staying at resorts grew steadily from 350,000 to 1,100,000 which was equal to the ending point of backpacking.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

staying: 4

resorts: 4

backpacking: 4

australia: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. Some of the data is incorrect, and there are some misinterpretations of the trends. For example, the report states that backpacking was more prevalent than staying at resorts in 1995, which is not supported by the data. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate and that the trends are correctly interpreted. Also, pay attention to the specific years mentioned in the task instructions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate level of coherence and cohesion. The information is generally presented in a logical order, with an overview followed by more detailed paragraphs. However, the transitions between some sentences and ideas could be smoother to enhance the flow of the report. For instance, the shift from the overall trends to the specific figures for each country could be more clearly signposted. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear topic to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and sophistication. While words like 'surged,' 'tripled,' and 'declining sharply' are effective, the report could benefit from a wider array of synonyms and more precise language to describe the trends and data. Consider using more specific vocabulary related to tourism and statistical changes. For example, instead of 'increased dramatically,' you could use 'experienced a substantial upswing' or 'saw a marked increase.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. While the sentence structures are varied, there are inaccuracies in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'Backpacking was 1,600,000 in 1995' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'The number of backpackers was 300,000 in 1995'. Proofreading carefully and focusing on correcting these errors will improve the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

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