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Band 7+: The table below shows the average amount of money spent per month on different categories of goods by people in four age groups in 2020. The pie chart shows the percentage of total spending that each category represents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table and pie chart detailing monetary expenditures on categories of goods by various age groups in 2020. Table data: Food, Age 18-25 $217, 26-35 $289, 36-45 $412, 46-55 $482; Clothing, Age 18-25 $143, 26-35 $97, 36-45 $53, 46-55 $27; Entertainment, Age 18-25 $102, 26-35 $78, 36-45 $48, 46-55 $22; Education, Age 18-25 $46, 26-35 $24, 36-45 $0, 46-55 $0; Health, Age 18-25 $222, 26-35 $52, 36-45 $107, 46-55 $159. Pie chart proportions: Food 40%, Clothing 15%, Entertainment 10%, Education 15%, Health 20%.

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The table depicts the average amount of money spent on different commodities of goods by people of various age groups in the year 2020. The pie chart, on the other hand, illustrates the total percentage of spending on various categories of goods by people of various age groups, consists of 18-55 years.

Overall, the food and health category shows an increase in the amount of money spending from age group of 18-25 years to 46-55 years. Whereas, Clothing, entertainment and education, money spend by age group 18-25 years is higher as compared to 46-55 years.

The table represents the spending of money in US dollars on various categories of goods i.e. food, clothing, entertainment, education, and health. In the category of food, the spending of money substantially increases from the age group of 18-25 years to 46-55 years. Similarly, the health category shows a remarkable increase in the spending of money from the age group of 18-25 years to 46-55 years. In contrast, categories consist of clothing, and entertainment, depicts a substantial decrease on the amount of money spend by the age group of 18-25 years to 46-55 years. Whereas, the spending of money on education is higher in age group consists of 18-25 years and decreases in the age group of 26-35 years. Also, people in age groups 36-45 years and 46-55 years do not spend any amount of money on education.

In terms of pie chart, the percentage of total spending by people of 18-55 years of age on food comprises the higher proportion of 40% of total, followed by health which consists of 20% of total spending. Clothing and education represent a similar composition of 15% each whereas entertainment comprises 10% of the total spending in the year 2020.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 14

money: 9

spending: 9

group: 7

18-25: 6

46-55: 6

total: 5

amount: 4

people: 4

various: 4

health: 4

clothing: 4

entertainment: 4

education: 4

goods: 3

groups: 3

categories: 3

consists: 3

category: 3

whereas: 3

spend: 3

higher: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of both the table and the pie chart, and makes relevant comparisons. The overall trend is correctly identified, and key data points are mentioned. However, there are some inaccuracies in the description of the health category (the spending does not consistently increase across all age groups) and the pie chart is described in a somewhat repetitive manner. The report could be improved by more precise data reporting and clearer organization.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with clear paragraphs for the overview, table details, and pie chart details. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Similarly', 'In contrast', and 'In terms of' helps the reader follow the progression. However, some sentences are long and slightly repetitive, and the flow could be improved by varying sentence structures and reducing redundancy. For example, the phrase 'the spending of money' is used repeatedly, which can be streamlined. Overall, the message is clear and easy to follow, with only minor lapses in cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'depicts', 'illustrates', 'substantially increases', 'remarkable increase', and 'comprises'. There is evidence of flexibility in word choice. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'different commodities of goods' (redundant) and 'money spending' (should be 'money spent' or 'spending'). The phrase 'consists of 18-55 years' is awkward. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations, and avoid repetition of 'spending of money' by using synonyms like 'expenditure' or 'outlay'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are some errors in subject-verb agreement and phrasing, such as 'the spending of money substantially increases' (should be 'increases substantially' for natural word order) and 'categories consist of clothing, and entertainment, depicts' (subject-verb agreement error). Also, 'money spend' should be 'money spent'. Punctuation is generally correct, but there are a few comma splices and awkward constructions. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but the errors are noticeable and slightly affect clarity. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement and use more varied sentence structures.

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