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Band 6+: The table below shows the average amount of money spent per month on different categories of goods by people in four age groups in 2020. The pie chart shows the percentage of total spending that each category represents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table and pie chart detailing monetary expenditures on categories of goods by various age groups in 2020. Table data: Food, Age 18-25 $217, 26-35 $289, 36-45 $412, 46-55 $482; Clothing, Age 18-25 $143, 26-35 $97, 36-45 $53, 46-55 $27; Entertainment, Age 18-25 $102, 26-35 $78, 36-45 $48, 46-55 $22; Education, Age 18-25 $46, 26-35 $24, 36-45 $0, 46-55 $0; Health, Age 18-25 $222, 26-35 $52, 36-45 $107, 46-55 $159. Pie chart proportions: Food 40%, Clothing 15%, Entertainment 10%, Education 15%, Health 20%.

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The table depicts the average monthly expenditure of people per month on different age categories of goods, while the pie chart illustrates the proportion of total spending allocated to each category in 2020.

Overall, upon scrutinizing the figures, the expenditure of food and health increased with age, while spending on education, clothing decline. Moreover, food hold highest share of total investment.

18-25 age group spent on food $217 and this trend rose with age and $482 was peak number at age of 46-55. A similar trend noted with health. By contrast, expenditure was decreased with age on cloth, entertainment. Moreover, education dropped from $46 in 18-25 age to $0 at 46-55 age.

Food accounted for the largest share of total spending at 40%, while entertainment and health each represented 15%. In addition, clothing made up 20% of total expenditure, whereas education accounted for the remaining 10% in 2020.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

expenditure: 4

total: 4

while: 3

spending: 3

health: 3

education: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the data and provides a generally clear overview of the information presented. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported from the pie chart. To improve, ensure all data is accurately represented and consider adding more specific comparisons or contrasts between the different age groups and categories to enhance the analysis. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the flow could be improved. The organization of information is somewhat disjointed, and transitions between ideas are not always smooth. Consider grouping similar trends together and using clearer connecting words to enhance coherence. For example, you could discuss the increasing trends (food and health) in one paragraph and the decreasing trends (clothing, entertainment, and education) in another. Also, ensure that each sentence logically follows from the previous one.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. While the report conveys the necessary information, using a wider range of synonyms and more specific terms would enhance the quality of the writing. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'expenditure,' consider alternatives like 'spending,' 'investment,' or 'allocation.' Also, try to incorporate more descriptive adjectives and adverbs to add detail and nuance to your descriptions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'food hold highest share' should be 'food holds the highest share,' and 'expenditure was decreased' should be 'expenditure decreased.' Pay close attention to these areas and proofread carefully to minimize errors. Additionally, vary your sentence structure to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical control.

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