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Band 5+: Task 1: The charts below show the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows reservoir water levels as percentages of maximum for Oct 2009 and Oct 2010 across six cities: Darwin has 20% in 2009, 80% in 2010; Sydney has 55% in 2009, about 70% in 2010; Melbourne has slightly above 30% in 2009, about 45% in 2010; Brisbane has about 40% in 2009, 50% in 2010; Perth has about 23% in 2009, approximately 34% in 2010; Canberra has 50% in 2009, 100% in 2010.

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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of water in six specific places in the US in October of both 2009 and 2010.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that all cities were experienced an upward trend in water levels except Darwin and Melbourne. Additionally, Sydney and Canberra has always obtained the highest amount of water in 2009 and 2010 respectively.

As can be seen from the chart, Canberra had the initial proportion of water was nearly same as Sydney which was approximately 78%, and then the former witnessed a surge to about 98%, was much higher than the latter (82%). Additionally, despite having a low amount of water at first, Melbourne and Perth have climbed significantly twice in October 2010 compares to 2009.

However, the opposite was true for Darwin, which had a dramatic decline from over 45% to under 25% during a year and become the lowest water obtaining city over six given ones. Regarding Brisbane, there was not any noticeable change between 2009 and 2010 in this city.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the data presented in the graphs. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data presented, such as the location (US instead of Australia) and specific figures for water levels, which deviate significantly from the provided description. The overall trends are also not accurately captured. Ensure that the report accurately reflects the data and context provided in the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally easy to follow, with a clear introduction and body paragraphs. Cohesive devices are used, but their application could be more varied and precise. Paragraphing is adequate, but the flow between ideas within paragraphs could be improved for greater clarity.

Lexical Resource

A range of vocabulary is used to describe the data, and it is generally appropriate. However, there are some instances where word choice could be more precise or natural. For example, 'places' instead of 'cities' and 'obtained' instead of 'had' or 'recorded'. Expanding vocabulary related to data description and comparison would be beneficial.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are noticeable grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect the overall accuracy and fluency. For instance, subject-verb agreement errors ('cities were experienced', 'Canberra and Sydney has'), incorrect prepositions ('in October 2010 compares to 2009'), and awkward phrasing ('the initial proportion of water was nearly same as Sydney which was approximately 78%'). Focusing on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction would be helpful.

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Band 5+: Task 1: The charts below show the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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