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Band 5+: the bar chart below show the marriage and divorce statistic for eight countries 1981 and 1994.

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The image contains two bar charts representing statistics for marriage and divorce across eight countries in 1981 and 1994. In the marriage statistic chart, 1981 figures are as follows: USA 10; UK 7; Poland 7; Germany 7; France 7; Italy 7; Canada 7; Australia 9. In 1994, the figures are: USA 8; UK 8; Poland 7; Germany 6; France 6; Italy 6; Canada 7; Australia 7. In the divorce statistic chart for 1981, the numbers are: USA 5; UK 3; Poland 2; Germany 2; France 2; Italy 2; Canada 3; Australia 5. For 1994, the divorce figures are: USA 4; UK 3; Poland 1; Germany 2; France 2; Italy 2; Canada 4; Australia 4.

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The chart illustrates the comparison of the marriage and divorce rates of eight countries in the years 1981 and 1994. It is meassured per thousand people.

Regardly, the marriage statistic over numbers the seperation statistic by twice as high, in both marriage and divorce, USA has showen the highest rate among orther countries.

Respectively, in marriage rate , 1981 engages out performs the 1994’s one, USA has the highest rate in both with the number ten in 1981 and nine in 1994, furthermore the lowest one in 1981 is Denmark with the proprotion of five and in 1994 it is France with the proprotion of four.

On the other hand, in divorce statistic, unlike marriage , 1994 out numbers 1981, with USA still being the highest ranking in both 1981 with the rate of five and in 1994 with almost reaching the same number, they also showed the least proprotion in Italy, with 1981 and 1994 both lower than one and close to zero

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marriage: 5

divorce: 3

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proprotion: 3

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The report attempts to address the task by comparing marriage and divorce statistics across the given countries and years, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from its effectiveness. Key data points are misreported (e.g., USA marriage rate in 1994 is stated as nine instead of eight, and the lowest marriage rate in 1981 is incorrectly attributed to Denmark, which is not in the data). Additionally, the report omits specific figures for many countries and makes unsupported claims (e.g., divorce rates in Italy being below one, whereas the data shows two). The structure is somewhat disorganized, and there are language errors (e.g., 'meassured', 'Regardly', 'showen', 'proprotion') that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include a clear overview of main trends, and organize the information logically with precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and abrupt transitions. The introduction is clear, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and cohesive devices. The use of 'Regardly' and 'Respectively' is confusing and does not aid coherence. The final paragraph is particularly difficult to follow due to run-on sentences and unclear references. To improve, use clear paragraphing with a distinct overview and body paragraphs, and employ cohesive devices such as 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'illustrates', 'statistics', 'rates'), but there are frequent word choice errors and awkward collocations (e.g., 'meassured', 'over numbers', 'engages out performs', 'proprotion'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'highest' and 'lowest'. To improve, expand your lexical range with synonyms (e.g., 'figures', 'data', 'proportions') and use precise terms like 'exceed', 'outnumber', or 'account for'. Ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('statistic over numbers'), incorrect verb forms ('has showen'), and missing articles. Punctuation is often incorrect, leading to run-on sentences. There is limited variety in sentence structures, with many simple sentences. To improve, practice using a mix of complex and compound sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for spelling and punctuation. For example, correct 'meassured' to 'measured' and 'proprotion' to 'proportion'.

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