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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the number of international tourists (in millions) visiting five cities in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing international tourist arrivals in millions for five cities in 2010 and 2020. For 2010, the numbers were: Paris 15.8, Bangkok 11.5, Dubai 8.4, Istanbul 7.2, and Tokyo 6.0. For 2020, the numbers were: Paris 19.2, Bangkok 22.8, Dubai 16.7, Istanbul 13.4, and Tokyo 8.5.

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The bar chart illustrates the changes in number of tourists since 2010 to 2020. In this essay will summarise information about this chart.

Overall, its clear that the Paris was been absolutely leader among all cities and in 2020 Bankok significant go up. The smallest result shows Tokyo in 2010 to 2020 the number of tourist is little bit.

Looking to the details the Dubai 8.3 million and the Istanbul have 6.2 million tourist more than 2010 and this two city was been nearly same and also take a risk like this. And the Tokyo have 2.5 million tourist increase but the firs result was been like the nerly the other two cities Dubai and Istanbul.

In contrast the data of Istanbul have also the second the largest result among off all cities near the Tokyo, The best balance was been in Paris whatever when the Bankok shows the best increase.

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result: 3

tokyo: 3

tourist: 3

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by summarising the main features of the chart, but the language is often unclear and contains frequent grammatical errors that hinder understanding. Key data points are mentioned, but some inaccuracies and omissions are present. To improve, focus on clear and accurate sentence structures, and ensure all key comparisons are made explicitly. Proofreading for basic errors would also enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear progression and logical flow. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs are confusing and do not effectively group data or make clear comparisons. Cohesive devices are used inaccurately (e.g., 'Looking to the details', 'In contrast'), and the frequent grammatical errors disrupt the reader's ability to follow the message. To improve, structure the report with a clear overview of main trends, then group cities logically (e.g., those with significant increases vs. modest changes) and use appropriate linking words to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'take a risk like this', 'firs result', 'nerly'). There is an attempt to use some topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'illustrates', 'significant', 'increase'), but it is not used accurately or flexibly. To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing trends (e.g., 'rose', 'climbed', 'experienced growth', 'saw a rise') and use precise terms for comparisons (e.g., 'outperformed', 'lagged behind'). Avoid informal or vague expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impede understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the Paris was been absolutely leader'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'was been', 'go up'), missing articles, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex sentences. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, such as correct verb tenses and subject-verb agreement, and practice constructing more varied sentence structures. Proofreading for common errors is also essential.

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