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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by a men and woman for six different purposes in a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a horizontal bar chart detailing the number of car trips, in a year, categorized by purpose and gender in Europe: Day trip shows women at approximately 35 and men at slightly under 10; Sports/Entertainment presents women around 50 and men close to 75; Visiting friends indicates women near 155 and men around 100; Shopping reveals women at roughly 125 and men at about 110; Travelling to work lists women slightly above 210 and men at approximately 260.

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The bar chart compares the number of trips using cars by male and female for five main objectives per day in a European city.

Overall, the number of women who use cars for visiting friends and shopping is higher than men, while the opposite is true for remaining fields.

Looking at the figure of European women, there are approximately 275 women who take a car trip for shopping, the highest among other purposes. The number of car trips for visiting friends and travelling to work were lower with around 210. Followed by over 125 women using cars for sport/ entertainment and only nearly 25 in day trips.

Looking at the figure of European men, more than 350 car trips taken by men for travelling to work per day, making it stays at the first place. For visiting friends and shopping, there are around 185 car trips, the number of men who take a car trip for sport/ entertainment was slightly lower, with under 145. At the least, there are only over 25 car trips taken by men for day trips.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

trips: 6

number: 4

women: 4

european: 3

visiting: 3

friends: 3

shopping: 3

there: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task requirements and provides a reasonable overview of the data. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some areas where more precise comparisons could be made. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring that comparisons are clear and specific.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence issues. The structure is present, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overview are adequate, but the body paragraphs could benefit from clearer topic sentences and transitions. Try to group similar ideas together and use cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively. For example, you could start each paragraph with a sentence that clearly states the main point you will be discussing in that paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Consider using synonyms and more specific terms to describe the data. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'number of car trips,' you could use phrases like 'frequency of car journeys' or 'volume of car travel.' Also, ensure that your word choices accurately reflect the data presented in the chart. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. For example, sentences like 'Looking at the figure of European women, there are approximately 275 women who take a car trip for shopping, the highest among other purposes' could be restructured for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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