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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists in three nationswho travel to Australia in 2005 and 2015.The graph below shows thenumber of tourists who use two types for holiday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures,and make comparisons where relevant。

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The image displays two visualizations: one bar chart showing tourists to Australia from the UK, US, and Japan in 2005 and 2015, and a line graph showing the type of holiday these tourists took. In the bar chart, UK tourists numbered 600,000 in 2005 and 1,200,000 in 2015; US tourists numbered 500,000 in 2005 and 1,500,000 in 2015; Japanese tourists numbered 800,000 in 2005 and 600,000 in 2015. The line graph shows 'staying at a resort' tourists at 1,000,000 in 2005, 2,000,000 in 2010, and 3,000,000 in 2015, while 'backpacking' tourists numbered 500,000 in 2005, 1,500,000 in 2010, and 2,000,000 in 2015.

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The graph below displays the amount of people who travel to Australia from three countries between the year 2005 to 2015, The graph below reflects the number of tourists who used different types of holidays.

Overall, there is a noticeable rise in UK and US numbers over the entire period. Backpacking had a significant increase over the time period, unlike staying at a resort, which was popular and saw a dramatic decrease.

The United States was the lowest country to travel to Australia in 2005, with around 500,000 tourists, and then had a gradual increase over the years and became nearly 1,600,000 tourists in 2015. The United Kingdom was above the US, with exactly 800,000 tourists in 2005, and it kept increasing to around 1,600,000 tourists in 2015. Unlike the two nations, Japanese people had the biggest number of tourists in 2005, with around 1,600,000 tourists, and then went dramatically low in 2015 to be only 1M tourists.

Travelling by Backpacking was not popular in the year 2005, with nearly 500,000 backpackers, and it kept increasing over the years until it became a little over 1 million backpackers in 2015. Staying at a resort was the most common choice in 2005, with around 1,600,000, and it increased to hit 2 million and had a dramatic downfall to be equal to backpacking with nearly 1 million.

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tourists: 7

around: 4

1600000: 4

backpacking: 3

nearly: 3

million: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing both the bar chart and the line graph, and it makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., UK figures, Japanese figures, and the trend for staying at a resort) and some confusion in the description of the line graph (e.g., stating that staying at a resort decreased when it actually increased). The overall structure is clear, but the report would benefit from more precise data reporting and clearer organization of the two visuals. Focus on accurately representing the trends and values, and ensure that the overview clearly summarizes the main features of both charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for the bar chart and line graph. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'The graph below' repeated) and abrupt transitions between ideas. The overview could be more concise and better integrated. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Additionally, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link sentences and paragraphs more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'noticeable rise', 'gradual increase', 'dramatic decrease', and 'significant increase'. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'the lowest country to travel to Australia', 'went dramatically low', 'had a dramatic downfall'). To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the number of tourists from the US was the lowest', 'experienced a sharp decline'). Also, avoid repetition by using synonyms and varied expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, there are missing commas and run-on sentences (e.g., 'The graph below displays the amount of people who travel to Australia from three countries between the year 2005 to 2015, The graph below reflects...'). There are also subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'Backpacking had a significant increase... unlike staying at a resort, which was popular and saw a dramatic decrease' - the verb tense is inconsistent). To improve, proofread for punctuation, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use a variety of complex structures accurately. Practice using past tense consistently when describing data from past years.

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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists in three nationswho travel to Australia in 2005 and 2015.The graph below shows thenumber of tourists who use two types for holiday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures,and make comparisons where relevant。

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