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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults by age group in the UK who used the internet every day in the years 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows data on the percentage of adults by age group in the UK who used the internet every day from 2003 to 2006; for ages 16-24: 2003-80%, 2004-82%, 2005-86%, 2006-90%; for ages 25-44: 2003-60%, 2004-60%, 2005-68%, 2006-80%; for ages 45-54: 2003-40%, 2004-50%, 2005-60%, 2006-70%; for ages 55-64: 2003-20%, 2004-22%, 2005-32%, 2006-50%; for ages 65+: 2003-10%, 2004-10%, 2005-15%, 2006-20%.

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The bar chart illustrates the recorded data about the acess of the internet between 2003 to 2006 in different adults group in the context of USA.

Overall, age from 16-24 used the internet more in comparison to others throughout the years.

In 2003 and 2004, the internet service was used in same range of 80% but later in 2005 it has reached to 90%. However, later in 2006 it has slowly declined by 85% in total. In 25-44 age groups the range of the internet user number is increased in 4 years and went to 80% from70%. In the context of 45-54 up and down in percentage can be seen.

In 55-64 groups the dramatically increased in the internet user can be seen from the given data. Where it has level up to 55% by the end of 2006. On the other hand in 65+ adults the access to the internet was least in all years but in comparison to 2003 it has increased slowly to almost 20% in 2006.

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 6

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several significant issues that impact clarity and accuracy. First, the report incorrectly identifies the location as the USA, whereas the task specifies the UK. Second, there are several data inaccuracies: for example, the report claims the 16-24 age group declined to 85% in 2006, while the data shows an increase to 90%. Additionally, the description of the 45-54 age group as having 'up and down' trends is not supported by the data, which shows a steady increase. To improve, ensure all data points are reported accurately, maintain consistency with the context provided in the task, and focus on describing the actual trends (increases or decreases) shown in the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to follow the progression of the data. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'However', 'On the other hand'), they are often used incorrectly or do not logically connect the sentences. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences logically reflect the relationship between the data points being compared.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and frequently used inaccurately. There are several instances of improper word choices (e.g., 'acess of the internet', 'different adults group', 'the dramatically increased') and spelling errors ('acess'). Additionally, some phrasing is repetitive or awkward. Aim to use a wider range of academic synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' (e.g., 'surged', 'climbed', 'declined', 'plummeted') and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used in their correct forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, prepositional errors (e.g., 'between 2003 to 2006' instead of 'between 2003 and 2006'), and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or contain awkward constructions that obscure the intended meaning. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensuring that complex sentences are joined correctly with appropriate conjunctions.

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