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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart illustrating the percentage of Australian men and women, divided by age groups, engaging in regular physical activity in 2010. It shows males aged 15-24 having the highest participation at 52.8%, with a steady decline to 45.1% in the 65 and over group. Females show a peak at 47.7% in the 45-54 age group, with the lowest at 43.3% in the 25-34 age group. Overall, male participation is consistently higher than female across all age groups.

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The given bar chart demostrates the proportion of Australian male and female across all age groups who engaged in regular physical activity in 2010.

Overall, it can be seen that female attended more than male in almost all different age, with the exception of the younger democraphic. Additionally, the proportion of people who joined in physical activity more popular in elder age.

In terms of peple who in age 15 to 24, the percentage of male who joined physical activity was higher than femal, which 52,8% compared to 47,7%. Additionally, in the 25 to 34 age group, male witnessed an decreased to 42,2%, wheareas female saw a growth from at 48,9%. Moreover, in the age 35 to 44, man still experienced a fall at 39,5%, while woman saw a gradually increase at 52,5%.

With respect to people aged 45 and above, man had a slightly increase at 43,1%, while woman experienced unchanged at 53,3%. In the aged 55 to 64, the overall percentage of Australian female engaging in exercise (53%) surpassed that of male (45.1%). Regarding to the last age group, male and female shared the same percentage, at 46,7% and 47.1%, respecively.

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female: 5

physical: 3

activity: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data presented and some misinterpretations of the trends. The structure is present, but the details need closer attention to ensure accuracy. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and avoid misstating the relationships between the data points.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and the information is not presented in a logical order. The flow of ideas is difficult to follow, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related information effectively. Consider organizing the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific age groups or trends, and a concluding statement.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the ability to express the information accurately and concisely. There is a lack of precision in word choice, and some terms are used inappropriately. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to data description and comparison, such as 'proportion,' 'percentage,' 'increase,' 'decrease,' 'peak,' 'decline,' 'outnumber,' and 'exceed.' Also, focus on using more precise language to describe the trends and differences in the data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in article usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully for errors in grammar and punctuation.

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