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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the sault intake of men and women in different age groupds in a country in Europe in 2019.

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The image presents a bar chart illustrating salt intake (mg per day) for men and women across various age groups in a European country in 2019; for age group 2-5, men consume 2,000, women 2,400; 6-11, men intake 3,000, women 3,500; 12-19, men 4,500, women 4,000; 20-29, men 4,800, women 4,100; 30-39, men 5,500, women 4,200; 40-49, men 5,000, women 3,800; 50-59, men 4,500, women 3,800; 60-69, both genders consume 3,500; 70+, men 3,000, women 2,500; a horizontal line indicates a recommended daily intake of 2,300 mg.

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The supplied bar chart illustrated the percent of consuming salt by males and females in different age groups in Europe in 2019. A glance of the graph is enough to make it clear that, the age group 30-39 consumed salt more then other age groups.

To begin with, the children aged 2-5 and 6-11 ate salt less then other age groups (the age group’s 2-5 boys about 1700 milligrams and girls about 1500 milligrams) when it comes to age group 6-11 they consumed a little more (boys 2700 milligrams, girls 2500)

The highest result get age group 30-39, their indicator show 5000 milligrams for men and approximately 3500 for women. In addition, we can notice that, the age groups 60-69 and older people’s age group (+70) illustrate similar results (approximately 3900 for men and 2250 for women)

The last three age groups also give almost similar indicators (teenagers 12-19 nearly 2550) the older age group 4900 for males and 3500 for females. The age consumed 4000 milligrams by men and 3000 by women.

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milligrams: 4

consumed: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with organization and clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and organizing the information into clear, logical paragraphs. Also, ensure that the units are correctly identified (mg instead of percent).

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between age groups feel abrupt. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more logically. For instance, consider grouping age groups with similar trends together. The overview is present but could be more insightful, highlighting the most significant overall trends rather than just the highest consumption group. Use cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There's a reliance on phrases like 'age group' and 'consumed salt.' Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data, such as 'salt intake,' 'consumption levels,' or 'dietary habits.' Also, be more precise with your language; for example, instead of 'ate salt less,' use 'had a lower salt intake.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'illustrated the percent of consuming salt' should be 'illustrated the salt intake.' Pay close attention to sentence structure and ensure that your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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