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Band 5+: The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing school A and school B in five subjects, with school A having 20% in Math, 10% in Science, 5% in Literature, 5% in Drawing, and 70% in Sport, while school B has 10% in Math, 20% in Science, 15% in Literature, 50% in Drawing, and 10% in Sport.

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The bar chart gives information about the students choosing their favourite subjects from five options such as, social science, science, language, craft/drawing, and sport, in two middle schools, school A and school B.

Overall, school A shows the highest number of students who preferred subject of sport, while craft/drawing is the most chosen subject in school B. In contrast school A has fewer number of students choosing craft/drawing, as well number of students who choose science in school B.

Sport is the most popular subject in school A, with 36 students choosing it as their favourite subject, compared to just 5 students in school B. Subject of science was preferred by 9 students in school A, while school B shows the most small number on the chart with just 2 students choosing this subject.

In contrast, craft/drawing is the most popular subject in school B, with 25 students choosing it, whereas only 4 students are choose it in school A. Students in school B are at 18 number of choosing language subject, while students in school A are at just 5 number of choosing this subject. Finally, Social Science subject has 10 number of students in school B, as well as 6 students in school A who choose it as their favourite subject.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 16

students: 14

subject: 10

choosing: 7

number: 7

science: 5

craft/drawing: 4

their: 3

favourite: 3

while: 3

choose: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall description with some comparisons between the two schools. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., the figures for sport, science, and drawing do not match the visual description). Additionally, some information is presented unclearly or with awkward phrasing, and the report lacks a clear summary of the main features for both schools. To improve, ensure the data is accurately reported, use clearer language, and structure the response with a clear overview followed by detailed comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'as well number of students who choose science in school B'). The paragraphing is adequate, but the logical progression of comparisons could be smoother. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear set of comparisons and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast') more consistently and accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are several instances of awkward or inaccurate word choices (e.g., 'the most small number', 'are at 18 number of choosing', 'students choosing their favourite subjects from five options such as, social science, science, language, craft/drawing, and sport'). To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms for 'popular' and 'number' (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'preferred'), and ensure collocations are natural (e.g., 'the highest proportion', 'a small percentage'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a range of sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Examples include 'compared to just 5 students in school B' (missing 'compared with' or 'whereas'), 'only 4 students are choose it' (incorrect verb form), and 'Students in school B are at 18 number of choosing language subject' (ungrammatical). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the overall accuracy needs improvement. To improve, review subject-verb agreement, verb forms, and word order, and practice writing more complex sentences with accurate grammar.

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