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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the number of students studying six different subjects at a university in 2023.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing the number of students enrolled in several subjects at a university in 2023: Business has 8000 students, Engineering 9500, Medicine 7000, Law 4000, Art 3000, and IT 8500 students.

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The bar chart shows number of students studying diferent subjects at a univesity in 2023.

Overall, it is clear that, the majotiry of students studying engineering, while the figure of art reach the lowest point, followed by law. Moroever, bussiness, IT, and medicine are popular subjects in that year.

Regarding engineer, it reached the highest point with 9500 students. This was the most attracting subject for students at a university, followed by IT, which reached 8500 and was nearly equal to engineer. Moroever, bussiness ranked third with 8000 student. In conclusion, engineer, IT, and bussiness was subjects accounted of the highest figure.

By contrast, art hit a minimum, students studying art accounted for 3000 of all students at a university, followed by law with 4000 student studied. Although law is slightly higher than art, there was no difference about student numbers. Although art and law have few students studying, medicine had 7000 students, which is equal to art and law of students combined.

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students: 9

studying: 4

subjects: 3

followed: 3

bussiness: 3

engineer: 3

student: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the highest and lowest categories and providing a general overview. All key data points from the visual description are included. However, the response is somewhat repetitive, particularly in the way it groups the high-enrollment subjects. To improve, focus on varying your sentence structures and avoiding redundant conclusions within paragraphs. Additionally, ensure that comparisons are more precise; for example, instead of stating there was 'no difference' between Law and Art, you could describe them as being relatively close in scale compared to the larger subjects.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression is occasionally hindered by repetitive sentence structures and improper use of cohesive devices. For instance, the use of 'In conclusion' is inappropriate for a Task 1 report, as this task requires a summary/overview rather than a concluding opinion. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words and ensure that each paragraph flows naturally into the next without redundant transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'majotiry', 'bussiness', 'engineer' instead of 'engineering'). There is also a lack of precision in word choice; for example, using 'the most attracting subject' is unnatural in an academic context. To improve, aim to use more academic synonyms for 'highest' and 'lowest' (such as 'peak', 'nadir', or 'predominant') and ensure that subject names are used consistently in their noun form.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that impact the clarity of the message. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'bussiness... was subjects'), incorrect word forms (using 'engineer' instead of 'engineering'), and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'accounted of the highest figure'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, practice complex sentence structures such as relative clauses and ensure that singular/plural nouns match their corresponding verbs.

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