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The image presents a vertical bar graph illustrating average annual Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth across four decades for three distinct groups: Wealthy countries, Globalizers, and Non-globalizers. For the 1960s, the percentages are 5.0% (Globalizers), 3.0% (Non-globalizers), and approximately 4.0% (Wealthy countries). In the 1970s, they are 2.5% (Globalizers), 3.0% (Non-globalizers), and 3.5% (Wealthy countries). For the 1980s, they show 3.0% (Globalizers), 1.0% (Non-globalizers), and 2.0% (Wealthy countries). For the 1990s, they register 5.0% (Globalizers), 2.0% (Non-globalizers), and 3.0% (Wealthy countries).

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers from 1960 to 1990. Overall, although the percentage of domestic products in wealthy country was the highest at the beginning, the globalisers reached a peak at the end of the period.

Firstly, the proportion of domestic products in wealthy countries experiensed an downward trend. Starting at just under 5%, the figure in wealthy country dropped sighnificantly to just under 3% in 1970, before decreased again to approximately 2,1 % in the following decade. There was a slight decriese to 2% at the end of the period.

Secondly, turning to the proportion of domestic products in glovalisers, it experiensed an upward trend. It increased to just under 3% in 1970, before rising again to approximately to 3,3% at the next 2 decades. The figure for globalisers reached a peak at just under 5% at the end of the period. Finally, the percentage og domestic products in non-globalisers witnessed a significant rise to just above 3% in the next decade, before dropping dramatically to approximately 1,2 % at the final year.

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wealthy: 4

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proportion: 3

globalisers: 3

before: 3

approximately: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The trends for wealthy countries and globalizers are generally described, but the non-globalizers' trend is incorrectly stated as rising initially, whereas the data shows a decline. Additionally, some specific data points are inaccurate (e.g., wealthy countries at 2.1% in the 1980s, globalizers at 3.3% in the 1990s). The report also omits the 1960s data for wealthy countries and non-globalizers. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and that trends are correctly identified. Also, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'experiensed', 'sighnificantly', 'glovalisers').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and two main paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, 'the proportion of domestic products in wealthy countries experiensed an downward trend' is a bit clumsy, and the use of 'firstly' and 'secondly' is acceptable but could be more sophisticated. The paragraphing is logical, but the transitions between ideas could be smoother. To improve, use more varied linking words and ensure each sentence flows naturally into the next.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'reached a peak', 'witnessed a significant rise', 'dropping dramatically'), but there are several spelling errors and word choice issues that detract from the overall quality. For instance, 'experiensed' should be 'experienced', 'sighnificantly' should be 'significantly', 'decriese' should be 'decrease', and 'glovalisers' should be 'globalisers'. Additionally, the phrase 'proportion of domestic products' is not the most accurate way to describe GDP growth; 'average annual GDP growth' would be more precise. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates some range in sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'an downward trend' should be 'a downward trend', 'before decreased' should be 'before decreasing', and 'approximately to 3,3%' should be 'approximately 3.3%'. Also, the use of commas and decimal points is inconsistent (e.g., '2,1 %' vs '3.3%'). To improve, review basic grammar rules for articles, verb forms, and prepositions, and ensure consistent use of punctuation and number formats.

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