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Band 6+: The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s),over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet

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The image details downloads in 1000s of three computer packages over five weeks: ActiveX downloads in week 1 are approximately 55, week 2 is 70, week 3 is about 105, week 4 is near 110, week 5 is around 125; Java downloads in week 1 are close to 40, week 2 is approximately 40, week 3 is about 40, week 4 is about 50, week 5 is near 80; Net downloads in week 1 are about 20, week 2 is around 40, week 3 is almost 60, week 4 is approximately 70, week 5 is close to 140.

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The horizontal bar chart illustrates the data on the number of downloads of three different computer packages per week. Overall, ActiveX was the most frequently downloaded package in all five weeks, while Net had the fewest downloads throughout the period.

ActiveX had gradual increase from approximately 70,000s in week 1 to over 120,000s in week5 even though it experienced a slight decline in week 4, about 90,000s. Similarly, Java also showed a stead upward trend over the five week period. It started at over 40,000s in week 1 and increased gradually to reach around 80,000s at the end of the period.

In contrast, Net had the lowest download figures throughout the period. It began at about 38,000s in the first week, dropped slightly in week 2, and then fell sharply to around 20,000s in week 3. However, it recovered in the last two weeks, climbing to roughly 40,000s in week 4 and reaching its peak of around 50,000 in the final week.

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