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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph comparing the number of visits to a community website for the first and second years of use from September to August: Sept (1st year: ~1,000, 2nd year: ~2,500), Oct (1st year: ~2,000, 2nd year: ~5,000), Nov (1st year: ~3,000, 2nd year: ~10,000), Dec (1st year: ~6,000, 2nd year: ~15,000), Jan (1st year: ~5,000, 2nd year: ~10,000), Feb (1st year: ~1,000, 2nd year: ~1,000), Mar (1st year: ~2,000, 2nd year: ~2,000), Apr (1st year: ~5,000, 2nd year: ~12,000), May (1st year: ~7,000, 2nd year: ~15,000), June (1st year: ~15,000, 2nd year: ~20,000), July (1st year: ~21,000, 2nd year: ~25,000), Aug (1st year: ~10,000, 2nd year: ~14,000).

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The bar chart provides information about the number of views to a community website in its first and second year of use. Overall, second year of use has the largest number of visit in almost of months, except for August which declines lower than first year of use

In September of the first year, about 2500 visitors came to a community website. The figures for people who view this website increased to 10000 viewers in November and December before decreasing to just below 2500 in February in the second year. The second year of use was still higher than the first in almost the entire period, about approximately 4900 people in September. The viewer increased in November then decline in February at 18000 and 10000, respectively

In March of the first year, users came to this website at 4400 and rising steadily to 17000 then overtook the August of second year to 15000. About 10000 visitors in March of the second, the figures raised to 21000 viewer in July before decreasing to 14000 in August

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