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Band 5+: The bar charts below show changes in the monthly sales of broadband products over one year when compared with the previous year. The products are in three categories - satellite, cable and all other broadband products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents three bar charts detailing monthly percentage changes in broadband product sales compared to the previous year; for Satellite from January to December, the changes are: -10%, 20%, 10%, 20%, 10%, 0%, -10%, 20%, 10%, -10%, 0%, 10%; for Cable from January to December, the changes are: -20%, -10%, -20%, 0%, 20%, 10%, -10%, 10%, 0%, 20%, 0%, 10%; for Other broadband products from January to December, the changes are: 0%, 10%, 0%, 10%, 0%, 0%, -10%, 0%, 0%, -10%, 0%, -10%.

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The bar chart gives information about the branded products in the monthly off in one year in comparison to previous year .

Overall the change in the product of satellite is fluctuated and the cables are dramatically increased and the other brodband products are slowly rise up.

The change in the products of satellite is decreased for around -5 to -35 percent in the first three months.In next three months the change in the products of satellite is fiuctuated.In the momth of september the change rose of the highest percent .

In the starting months the change of cables started from -25 and ended for around -5 percent and in the month of july ,it significantly increased to its highest level for about 25 % and then sharp decresae happened in the last month .

The change in the salaries of other brodband products is started about5% and then increasing for about 8% only ,but in the month of july the change in salaries is sharply decreased followed by the last month .

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

change: 7

products: 5

month: 4

about: 3

satellite: 3

percent: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. It misinterprets the data (e.g., satellite changes are described as -5 to -35 percent, which is not supported by the visual description), and introduces irrelevant content (e.g., 'salaries' instead of 'sales'). The overall trend is vaguely described, but key features are not accurately reported, and comparisons are limited. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends for each category, using correct data ranges, and making clear comparisons. Avoid introducing unrelated terms and ensure all information is relevant to the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for each product category. However, the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'the change in the product of satellite') and abrupt transitions between ideas. The overview is present but could be more precise and better integrated. Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently managed, and some sentences are difficult to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure each paragraph focuses on one main idea, and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link comparisons smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent misuse of words (e.g., 'branded products' instead of 'broadband products', 'salaries' instead of 'sales'). There is some attempt to use range (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'dramatically increased'), but the language is often imprecise and lacks sophistication. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and precise terms (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined steadily'), and avoid informal or incorrect expressions. Also, ensure correct spelling (e.g., 'broadband', 'fluctuated', 'decrease').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect prepositions, and unclear comparisons (e.g., 'decreased for around -5 to -35 percent'). Punctuation is often missing or misused. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses) and ensure accuracy in tense, agreement, and punctuation. Proofreading for common errors would significantly enhance clarity.

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