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Band 6+: The bar graph below represents the data about the clubs joined by the people of two different age groups at a leisure center. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph of club preferences by age range, detailing the number of members in two age groups: 25-35 and 55-65. For Gardening, 70 members in the 55-65 group and 40 members in the 25-35 group; Photography sees 40 members in both age groups; Fitness has 50 members in the 25-35 group and 25 members in the 55-65 group; Arts and Crafts has 30 members aged 55-65 and 25 aged 25-35; Music/Dance shows 40 members in the 25-35 group and 20 members in the 55-65 group; Cycling sees 60 members in the 25-35 group and 10 members in the 55-65 group.

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The bar graph above shows the information about the clubs joined by people from two different age groups at a leisure center. The club offered activities including gardening, photography, fitness, arts and crafts, music/dance, as well as cycling.

In comparison, the two different age groups have contrasting club preferences. Based on the data, 25-35-year-old individuals prefer cycling (65 members) and the arts and crafts (60 members) club. Meanwhile, the 55-65-year-old individuals mostly like the gardening club (55 members). The least popular club with 25-35-year-old members is gardening, representing a drastic preference different from the older individuals who joined mostly the gardening club. Cycling is also the least chosen by older individuals, when it is a trend among younger individuals.

On the other hand, fitness and music/dance have an almost-balanced younger and older age group member. Fitness and music/dance are chosen by 110 younger people. And from the 55-65-year-old group, 100 people chose those. Photography, in fact, is a club preferred by both older and younger groups. 45 individuals from the younger group, and 45 individuals from the older group chose photography, resulting in balanced data from both groups.

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individuals: 6

older: 5

younger: 5

groups: 4

gardening: 4

group: 4

people: 3

different: 3

photography: 3

fitness: 3

music/dance: 3

members): 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a summary of the main features of the bar graph and making relevant comparisons between the two age groups. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., stating 65 members for cycling and 60 members for arts and crafts in the 25-35 age group, and 55 members for gardening in the 55-65 age group). Also, the report could benefit from a clearer overall structure and a more concise presentation of the data. To improve, ensure accuracy in data reporting and focus on presenting the information in a more organized and structured manner.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The introduction is adequate, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences to guide the reader. Transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the shift from discussing cycling and arts/crafts to gardening feels abrupt. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, some phrases are a bit repetitive or could be expressed more concisely. For instance, instead of repeatedly stating '25-35-year-old individuals' or '55-65-year-old individuals,' consider using synonyms or shorter alternatives where appropriate. Aim for more sophisticated word choices to enhance the overall impact of the report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair command of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. While the sentences are generally understandable, there are instances of incorrect verb tense, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Cycling is also the least chosen by older individuals, when it is a trend among younger individuals' could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Proofreading carefully and focusing on sentence structure will help improve the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

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