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Band 5+: The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Energy consumption for years 1998 and 2002', with a vertical axis labeled 'energy consumed' ranging from 0 to 45 and a horizontal axis labeled 'Source' listing five categories. For the year 1998, the approximate energy consumed was: Coal 21.8, Natural gas 23.0, petroleum 36.8, Nuclear electric Power 7.2, and Renewable Energy 6.6. For the year 2002, the approximate energy consumed was: Coal 22.4, Natural gas 23.2, petroleum 38.3, Nuclear electric Power 8.3, and Renewable Energy 6.0.

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The bar chart illustrates the natural gas which was consumed by people in the world between 1998 and 2002. It can be seen that petrolium was the most energy consumed by the people, while renewable energy was the least energy used in the world.

In detail, petrolium experienced the highest fuel used by people, there was an increase approximately 2 steps from 35 in 1998 to 38 in 2002. The second energy the most used in the world was natural gas, there was a slight increase from 1998 to 2002 to about 23 steps. Additionally coal was almost the same number of consumption with natural gas. There was an increase numer between 1998 to 2002, approximately 2 numbers.

Nuclear electric powe and renewable energy were the least consumption by people in the world. While there was an increse amount of nuclear energy from about seven to nine, on the contrary renewable energy grew down from approximately seven to six numbers.

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energy: 7

people: 4

there: 4

natural: 3

world: 3

renewable: 3

increase: 3

approximately: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the requirements of the task by summarizing the information presented in the bar chart. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately described and that comparisons are precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a basic overview of the data but lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The introduction is too general and doesn't provide a clear overview of the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between different energy sources. To improve coherence, use more specific language and provide clear connections between sentences and paragraphs. Consider grouping similar trends together and using transitional phrases to guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and overuse of simple words. For example, 'steps' and 'numbers' are vague and imprecise. To improve lexical resource, use more specific and varied vocabulary to describe the trends and data. Consider using synonyms for common words and phrases, and focus on using vocabulary accurately and appropriately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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