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Band 5+: The bar graph below shows the imports of electronics goods in 2000 and 2006, write it down.

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The image presents a bar graph detailing imports of electronic goods in millions of units for the years 2000 and 2006 across five categories: DVD players (2000: 3, 2006: 5.8), CD players (2000: 2.1, 2006: 1.7), televisions (2000: 6.2, 2006: 8.5), radios (2000: 4, 2006: 5.2), and video recorders (2000: 6.2, 2006: 2.8).

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The graph illustrates the importation of DVD players, CD players, televisions, radios and video recorders, in millions of units, in two different years -2000 and 2006.

Overall, DVD players, televisions and radios increased their imports over the time, whereas CD players and video recorders imports decreased showing an opposite trend.

Television was the most imported device in both years, with 6.2 millions in 2000 rising to 8.5 by 2006. While CD players stood at 2.1 millions in 2000 to then decreased to 1.7 million in the next six years. Making it the least imported device.

DVD players almost doubled its figures from 3 millions in 2000 to 5.8 millions in 2006, another appliance that rose its imports is radio from 4 millions to more than 5, respectively. In contrast, video recorders imports fell from 6.2 millions in 2000 to just under half in 2006, showing the largest difference between the two years in the same device.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

millions: 7

players: 6

years: 4

imports: 4

video: 3

recorders: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by comparing the changes in imports across the five categories and highlighting key details such as the most and least imported devices, as well as the largest change. The overall trend is clearly presented, and the data is generally accurate. Minor omissions, such as not explicitly stating the exact value for radios in 2006, are acceptable and do not detract from the overall quality. To improve, ensure precise data presentation and consider a more structured comparison of all categories to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors (e.g., missing commas, run-on sentences). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some transitions between ideas could be smoother. To improve, focus on creating clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas more naturally.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'illustrates', 'importation', 'opposite trend', and 'appliance'. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward expressions (e.g., 'rose its imports', 'almost doubled its figures', 'just under half'). To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid repetition. Use synonyms and more sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, there are missing commas, incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'to then decreased'), and subject-verb agreement problems (e.g., 'imports decreased showing'). The range of sentence structures is limited, and some sentences are run-ons. To improve, practice using a variety of complex and compound sentences, and ensure that punctuation is used correctly to separate clauses and ideas.

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