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Band 6+: The below map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now.

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The image shows two diagrams labeled 1980 and Now, depicting changes in a park's features over time. 1980's diagram has Trees, Pond with Bench, Flowers with a Gate. The Now diagram depicts Trees with added elements: Chairs, Desks, and Barbecue. The Pond with Bench remains unchanged while the Flowers are replaced by Bushes, and a new feature, Playground, is added. There are no numerical data points or percentages given.

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The provided maps illustrate the alternation to a park the happened between 1980 and the present time.

Overall, after looking at the 2 maps, it can observed that the park has seen significant changes in all parts since 1980. it is clear that two new branches has been added to the main road of the park to make it an now open area with no gates.

To begin with the east part of the park, it is obvious that the three trees in the northeast part has been rearranged to be with new three elements; the chairs, the desks, and the barbe-cue, which are used to prepare food, whereas the flowers section in the southeast corner has been altered to a play ground.

Moving to the opposite part in the west, it is clear that there is a new bench was added beside the pound. In addition, the flowers below the benches has been turned to a bush. Finally, the 2 main gates in the west and the south have been removed.

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Task Response

6.5

The response addresses the task by describing the changes in the park from 1980 to the present. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the unchanged pond with a bench and missing details about the playground and the removal of the gates.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear overall structure. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and linking ideas between sentences, affecting the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and repetitions are present. The report would benefit from more varied and precise vocabulary choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are errors in verb tense consistency, article usage, and punctuation. More attention to grammatical accuracy is needed.

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