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Band 7+: The below map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now.

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The image shows two diagrams labeled 1980 and Now, depicting changes in a park's features over time. 1980's diagram has Trees, Pond with Bench, Flowers with a Gate. The Now diagram depicts Trees with added elements: Chairs, Desks, and Barbecue. The Pond with Bench remains unchanged while the Flowers are replaced by Bushes, and a new feature, Playground, is added. There are no numerical data points or percentages given.

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The given map illustrates the alteration in a park that happened from 1980 to the present time.

Overall, it is apparent that the park has changed a lot, and a number of changes have been implemented that created features that did not exist in the past. It is clear that now, the park has been an open area with no gates, and the flower area has been replaced with a playground area.

To begin with, the benches have been increased, and the flower area next to the benches has been bush. Moreover, there is an eating area that has been added next to the area of the trees. The eating area has chairs, desks, and a barbecue.

Furthermore, there is a playground that has been provided in the park instead of the flowers area in the past. Also, now, there are three routes to reach outside the park with no gates compared to the two gates in the past.

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by describing the changes in the park from 1980 to the present. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the pond with a bench remaining unchanged and missing details about the trees. More specific details from the visual information could have been included.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent and cohesive, with a clear overall structure. However, there are some issues with paragraphing, as some information could have been grouped more effectively. Additionally, some repetition of ideas could be avoided for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and imprecise word choices are present. More varied and specific vocabulary related to the park features and changes could have been utilized to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are instances of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. More complex structures could have been used to demonstrate a higher level of grammatical range and accuracy.

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