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Band 6+: The chart and graph below give information about participants who entered the Olympics since it began.

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The image features two charts depicting Olympic participation across 1924, 1952, 1984, and 2012. The top bar chart, titled "Number of male and female participants in the Olympics," plots "Year" on the horizontal axis and "Number of participants" on the vertical axis from 0 to 6,000 in increments of 1,000, with a legend for "Men" and "Women". In 1924, Men are at approximately 3,000 and Women at around 150; in 1952, Men reach roughly 4,450 and Women approximately 500; in 1984, Men stand at around 5,300 and Women at about 1,600; in 2012, Men number around 5,900 and Women approximately 4,700. The bottom line graph, titled "Number of participants," plots "Year" on the horizontal axis against "Participants" on the vertical axis ranging from 0 to 12,000 with increments of 2,000, recording approximately 3,100 participants in 1924, 5,000 in 1952, 6,900 in 1984, and 10,600 in 2012.

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The bar chart shows information about how many men and women athletes in the Olypics from 1924 to 2012, while the line graph depicts data about the total number of participants in this games in the same period. Overall, it can be seen clearly that the number of both males and females who joined Olympics were an upward trend as same as the trend of total number of athletes.

Looking first at the bar chart, the number of male participants in the Olympics was an exactly 3000 in 1924, while that of females was nearly 0. However, there was a moderate increase in the number of men to just below 6,000 in 2012, which was more than that of women about 1,000, with approximeatly 5,000.

Moving on to the graph, the total number of athletes inclined steadily from about 3,000 in 1924 to around 5,000 in 1984, then there was a significant growth to above 10,000.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing both the bar chart and the line graph, and it provides an overall trend. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the number of female participants in 1924 is stated as 'nearly 0' but should be around 150, and the total number of participants in 1984 is incorrectly given as around 5,000 instead of approximately 6,900. Additionally, the report omits specific data for women in 1952 and 1984, and the final sentence about the total number of athletes is incomplete. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and avoid vague statements. Also, correct minor spelling errors (e.g., 'Olypics', 'approximeatly') and maintain a clear, concise structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for each chart. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'this games', 'as same as'). The overview is present but could be more clearly stated. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'upward trend', 'moderate increase', 'significant growth'), but there are several inaccuracies and repetitions. For example, 'inclined' is used instead of 'increased', and 'approximeatly' is misspelled. The range of vocabulary is limited, and some phrases are not natural (e.g., 'was an exactly 3000'). To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing trends (e.g., 'rose', 'climbed', 'surged', 'plateaued') and ensure correct spelling and word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'the number of both males and females who joined Olympics were an upward trend' has subject-verb agreement and article issues. Also, 'as same as' is incorrect. Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are awkwardly constructed. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and sentence structure. Reviewing common grammar rules and proofreading can help.

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