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Band 4+: The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children's charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts; the first shows revenue sources, and the second shows expenditures for a children's charity in the USA for one year. Revenue Sources: Donated Food 86.6%, Community Contributions 10.4%, Program Revenue 2.2%, Investment Income 0.2%, Other Income 0.4%, Government Grants 0.2%, totaling $53,561,580. Expenditures: Program Services 95.8%, Fundraising 2.6%, Management and General 1.6%, totaling $53,224,896.

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the pie chart illustrates amount of money received and spent to charity in USA in one year

overall, the amount of money is almost the same. the largest proportion in expenditure pie chart is program services, it’s also the biggest part in both charts. the main part in revenue sources graph is donated food

initially, similar trends in pie charts are the main big parts and approximately similar amounts. the expenditure have the biggest part among two charts – program services, which accounts for 95,8 percent of the entire graph. by contrast, the remaining categories recorded considerably lower figures.

revenue sources graph has more parts than other. it’s also has a largest proportion – donated food. the next is community contribution – the second biggest part. other parts, which smaller than community contribution, have the difference more than 10 percent. as a result, both categories accounted for similar total amounts with a slight difference.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features of both charts and making some comparisons. However, there are several issues: the introduction is incomplete (missing the source of the data), the overview is somewhat unclear, and the report lacks specific data for many categories. The language is repetitive and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, provide a clear overview, include key figures for all main categories, and use more precise and varied vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization is unclear and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'initially, similar trends...' and 'it's also has a largest proportion'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the report lacks clear topic sentences. To improve, plan the structure clearly: introduce the charts, give an overview of the main trends, then describe each chart in separate paragraphs with clear linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary range is limited and repetitive. There are errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'amount of money received and spent to charity', 'the main big parts', 'the difference more than 10 percent'). The report does not demonstrate flexibility or precision in lexical use. To improve, use a wider range of appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'accounted for', 'represented', 'constituted', 'the majority', 'a significant proportion') and ensure correct prepositions and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('the pie chart illustrates' vs. 'the pie charts illustrate'), missing articles ('to charity' should be 'to a charity'), incorrect verb forms ('it's also has' should be 'it also has'), and incomplete sentences. The range of grammatical structures is very limited, and punctuation is often incorrect. To improve, focus on writing clear, complete sentences, using a variety of structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses), and proofreading for basic grammar and punctuation errors.

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Band 4+: The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children's charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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