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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two visual elements: a line graph and a bar chart. The line graph details visits to and from the UK between 1979 and 1999, with "visits abroad by UK residents" rising from about 12 million in 1979 to 55 million in 1999; "visits to the UK by overseas residents" increasing from 10 million in 1979 to 28 million in 1999. The bar chart illustrates most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 with France leading at about 11 million visitors, followed by Spain with approx. 9 million, USA with around 4 million, Greece at nearly 3 million, and Turkey with about 2 million.

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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in million from the United Kingdom who went to abroad and overseas resident that came to the UK over the period from 1979 to 1999, while the bar chart provides information which countries were the most visited by the UK residents during 1999.

Overall,it can be seen that number of visits to and from the UK increased, and that France was the most popular country to go for UK residents, while the less visited nation was Turkey.

To begin, the level of attendance to abroad by the UK inhabitants was lower than foreign visitors who come to the UK. The figures started at the same amount, around 10 millions, but the number of visits abroad grew significantly over 50, whereas the number of people from overseas rose steadily to stand at slightly below 30 in 1999.

Turning to the bar chart, the most famous country for UK locals during 1990 was France which equaled to over 10 million. Turkey,Greece and United states of America were less famous, reaching roughly 4,3 and 2 million visited respectively.

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number: 4

million: 3

abroad: 3

visited: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing both the line graph and the bar chart, and it includes an overall trend. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report states that visits abroad started at the same amount as visits to the UK, but the visual description indicates they started at 12 million and 10 million respectively. Additionally, the report incorrectly says the bar chart is for 1990 instead of 1999, and it misstates the visitor numbers for Greece and the USA. The report also omits the specific figure for Turkey. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and that the time period is correctly identified. Also, aim to provide a more balanced coverage of the data, including specific figures for all countries mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for the line graph and bar chart. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the level of attendance to abroad' and 'the less visited nation was Turkey'). The overview could be more clearly separated from the introduction. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph has a single clear focus. Additionally, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'illustrates', 'increased', 'popular', 'steadily'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'attendance to abroad', 'inhabitants', 'famous' instead of 'popular', 'equaled to'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'visits' and 'popular'. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'residents', 'travelers', 'destinations', 'accounted for'). Also, avoid informal or incorrect collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, missing spaces after commas (e.g., 'Overall,it'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'which equaled to'), and subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'the number of visits abroad grew significantly over 50' - should be 'to over 50 million'). There is also a lack of variety in sentence structures, with many simple sentences. To improve, practice using a mix of complex and compound sentences, and proofread carefully for punctuation and grammatical accuracy.

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